Reviews for Another Chance
Mama-NaysRockFight chapter 18 . 18h
jeoliverio chapter 18 . 6/20
Whats going on, is this story dead or are you going to continue it? Its been dragging alot I really liked the beginning but then the chapters started to drag out more and more.
justaislinn chapter 1 . 5/7
This story looks interesting, and maybe your writing has improved since the first chapter, but for all that I want to read this I'm really struggling.
The grammar needs a lot of work, for one thing. The biggest issue is that you're only using "of" instead of "off" and you've done it so many times within the first 4 paragraphs that I scrolled straight down to write this bc I literally can't make any sense of this without reading everything twice.
Two different things, very different meanings.
Write on:)
Cutemummy21 chapter 14 . 10/25/2016
I love this so far ! I have not been able to stop reading, I love Bella jasper pairings
Guest chapter 8 . 4/29/2016
Sunday Bloody Sunday is a song of an Irish band called U2 it was first released in 1983 in an album called war
Babysis64 chapter 3 . 7/11/2014
wow this was another good chapter I thought. I hope that Jasper doesn't tell them about her past or her secret other wise she might not trust Jasper about any thing after that right.
Babysis64 chapter 2 . 7/10/2014
hey this was a good chapter as well. Wow Jasper was waiting for Bella at lunch time, probably to check in with her right. He was after all jealous of the younger guys tha drooled after her.
Babysis64 chapter 1 . 7/10/2014
this was a good first chapter. Well I'm glad that Bella had her brother and sister-in-law to help her when she was ready to move on well kind of heal. Also that was a nice surprise that she gave her dad huh. Wonder why Jasper is there
Hikada chapter 18 . 5/20/2014
love the story please update soon
cela chapter 8 . 4/7/2014
I thought millie gave the laptop to bella not Charlie.
jessikaC123 chapter 18 . 2/12/2014
I love this story, please could you consider updating. I would love to see where it ends up going
Miranada Betzalel chapter 8 . 10/24/2013
That song is actually "Sunday, Bloody Sunday" by U2. It was the opening single on their 1983 album "War." It was written as a political protest against anti-sectarian-violence, and mainly describes the horror felt by an observer of the "Bloody Sunday" incident in Londonderry during the Troubles in Northern Ireland, where British troops shot and killed unarmed civil rights protestors and bystanders who were rallying against internment (imprisonment without trial or evidence). It was, needless to say, a horrific example of the violence and cruelty that humans can inflict upon each other, and sparked international outrage. This is one of U2's most overtly political songs, but has become a staple at their concerts, and it was named the 272nd-greatest song by Rolling Stone on their list of "The 500 Greatest Songs of All Time". Paramore covered the song and introduced it to a new generation (who really should have known the song anyway; U2 isn't considered one of the best and most famous rock bands in the world for nothing, you know), but they most certainly didn't write it. Other than that minor issue (I apologize for my rant, btw), this has been a great story, and I can't wait to read more of it!
MysticStarfall chapter 18 . 10/1/2013
This story is absolutely amazing! I love how you combined Jumper and Twilight together like that. I never would have thought about doing a combination like that. It's great, and I can't wait to read more. Way to go! :)
Guest chapter 18 . 7/14/2013
I really wish you'd update the again soon! I love this story and the relationships Bella has with everyone especially Paul.
HisSecretLover18 chapter 18 . 3/22/2013
What's going to happen next? Will Jake finally accept that he imprinted on Leah? I hope you update soon please.
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