Reviews for The Second Born
JD Fanficing chapter 4 . 11/29
So you're grabbing crap from Mortal Kombat and Legend of Zelda? That's pretty cool(Sub-Zero joke).
How much of this stuff are you making up? I'd like to know this so that I can separate fact in Naruto and fanfiction-fact.
I will also re-ask this question in the latest chapter, just in case.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/27
Cool looking forward to the next update


Anyway amazing story. Keep doing what you are doing. Im loving it so far.
JD Fanficing chapter 2 . 11/21
That was amazing.
JD Fanficing chapter 1 . 11/21
I may enjoy a long story with details, but please throw in some excitement or something.
Guest chapter 12 . 8/21
stop spreding the time line to people besides naruto it is a complete waist of time wich every one just skips anyway
Guest chapter 8 . 8/21
a ussless chapter
Guest chapter 1 . 8/16
You have good ideas for a story but u gotta be real the rinnengan is the ultimate dojutsu, the dojutsu of a god really and u compare it to some brand name Sharingan and Byakugan. Please the tenseigan is the advanced version of byakugan, mangekyou is weaker than eternal even with a new name. Also stop rushing the story naruto and hinata are only 8 yrs old. They are not even old enough to kiss. So anyways,
This is for chpt 5
Guest chapter 4 . 12/1/2014
it's as if the rinnegan does'nt have any other technique other than seeing chakra and shinra tensei.
Guest chapter 15 . 11/30/2014
Great job, hope its still ongoing
alaosodiq07 chapter 6 . 11/7/2014
i don't know what use this will make, but let me give a piece of my mind. you said naruto can see through the eyes of his clones, so why could'nt he dodge sasuke's attacks if he could see them beforehand?
Anonamous chapter 15 . 10/3/2014
I love these stories, but it seems like Naruto is getting worse and worse every second! He used to be very good, and everyone loved him. Now, everyone is surpassing him. I'm getting the strong feeling that you don't like Naruto, because if you did, then he would actually be abke to keep up with everyone else!
Guest chapter 4 . 9/1/2014

Courage Strengh Intelligence
Zaref chapter 1 . 7/30/2014
Isn't itachi supposed to be konan's and nagato's senior 1 year
patrick chapter 15 . 4/1/2014
you are going to continue this right please i really liked it contact me on face book my names patrick goodale there will be an angel of death for my pic please contact me i really want to see more of this
Drakosis7734 chapter 1 . 2/26/2014
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