|Reviews for In Search of the Sun|
| brownwolf13 chapter 39 . 10/16/2014
Please update more! I love the story :)
Are you writing more?
| esmie chapter 39 . 9/3/2014
Are you not continuing this story? I was really into it :(
| Guest chapter 39 . 9/17/2013
I really enjoyed this fanfic please update soon , I'm so curious on what's gunna happen . And theme Ian Jacob fan myself but I hate how he always loses arguments and has to apologize to everyone . Just my opinion (:
| emmyfall chapter 39 . 11/8/2012
this is incredible! i love you're story! can't wait to read more :))) i'm so excited for breaking dawn pt 2! :) please continue cuz ur an amazing writer :)) please try not to take 3 yeras to update? hehe :)) thankssss! :)) xxxx
| msr709 chapter 38 . 11/4/2012
So happy to see this story back! Welcome back. Loved this story!
| savvyone chapter 39 . 8/14/2012
I usually love Leah, but I'm not sure about her advice here. I understand about Nessie trying to have friends, but I think Jake has every right to be cautious. I'm really not liking Clara, it seems like she's got too much power over Nessie (who at the moment is acting like a star struck 10 year old). I just hope she stays loyal to Jake and at least acts like she cares about what he thinks or feels.
| savvyone chapter 38 . 8/14/2012
I went back and reread this story since it's been awhile. I have to say I'm not impressed with Nessie. She supposedly physically and mentally matured at the age of 7 (10 years or so ago) but you would never guess. I don't care what her friends ability is, I can't believe she let her in on her secret. Nessie said earlier that she couldn't pick Jake over her family, but it appears that she is going to pick her friendship with Clara over her families safety as well as Jacob. I'm really not a fan of this Clara girl or the way Nessie is so trusting of her, I just have a hard time buying it.
| laurazuleta18 chapter 39 . 8/14/2012
Please update soon!
I have to ask something of you though...
I don't remember what this story was even about.
Can you do a recap? Like what's happened to everyone. Where ate they living and stuff?
| DaffyMaiden chapter 39 . 8/13/2012
Ah, Leah, I love you, don't ever change. "You don't want to be creepy, do you?" :D
(I bet she's the one the kids adore. I'd love to read your character profiles of the Black Swans!)
| TLynnson chapter 39 . 8/13/2012
The buildup and anticipation has me hooked. Can't wait for next update. Thank you!
| TLynnson chapter 38 . 8/13/2012
Knew ther was a reason I didn't like Clara. Wake up and smell the stranger danger Nessie!
Poor Jacob has to put up with this crap! Ugh...
| TLynnson chapter 31 . 8/13/2012
I think I may need to take my iced tea to the porch for a spell cause it just got hot in here!
So romantic and down right sassy. Loving it.
| TLynnson chapter 30 . 8/13/2012
Really like this perspective were Leah and Nessie are friendly. Too many stories depict Leah as hateful which lacks imagination. The playful banter is refreshing.
| Mysteryreader2 chapter 39 . 8/13/2012
Loved the quick update and you have me very curious for the next chapter! I really loved Leah's wisdom and I like how you write her and Jacob's friendship. Great update and can't wait for more!
| TLynnson chapter 21 . 8/12/2012
Dom Dom Dom! They are so going to get busted.