|Reviews for A Jealous Wish|
| rgillespie94 chapter 12 . 6/17
Is this dead?
| kronoan chapter 12 . 1/17
I'm really liking this story so far! I hope you continue it!
| Darkfire Kitten chapter 12 . 9/28/2015
Man, this is turning out really good. The difference in perspective, between Bardock, who has just had his son stolen, and Bulma, who believes she is rescuing her close friend from an abusive man is really cool. And the lack of communication leading to the doctor's death, and probable future tragedies works.
I also really like all the little details of hidden messages and tail sign language. And the way Bardock uses his sense of smell to hunt down Goku's kidnappers is really interesting too.
I know a good review is supposed to be balanced, but I didn't see anything that bothered me enough to mention. I really hope you're still continuing this, because I'd love to see where it goes from here.
| Batman Fanatic chapter 12 . 9/11/2015
Please update soon!
| trebeh chapter 4 . 6/11/2015
At least he'll get a boost in power once his bones heal due to the Saiyan zenkai ability. You should have Bardock train Goku to master his Oozaru (great ape) form.
| tomorrow4eva chapter 12 . 4/20/2015
Coming soon: Bulma vs Bardock?!
| Lyore chapter 3 . 4/10/2015
wait...goku takes no damage from bullet and nearly everything but Bardock need only to trowing him to the ground for breaking his bones and make him unconscious?
| a huge fan chapter 12 . 3/26/2015
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
seriously though, great fanfic
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/8/2015
Bardock is quite clever, isn't he?
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/8/2015
At least he has a reason for everything he does. He just looks like a psychopath doing it.
| Sakuraus chapter 12 . 11/30/2014
This one of the best Bardock, Goku fics I have read. A almost realistic clash of cultures of how to raise a child. We see Goku's friends point of view of Bardock and Bardock's view of them. And Bardock being an alien Saiyan , a race of fighters his view is way different from a human. And none of them understanding each other, yet all of them caring about Goku. Looking forward for more, hope you continue soon , :)
| Judaphine chapter 12 . 11/5/2014
Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work! :)
| PixelezOtaku chapter 12 . 10/30/2014
| shadowxxx chapter 12 . 9/26/2014
thank you great god goku ive wished to see this story continued since i 1st read it
| BartWLewis chapter 12 . 9/24/2014