|Reviews for A Jealous Wish|
| Darkfire Kitten chapter 12 . 9/28
Man, this is turning out really good. The difference in perspective, between Bardock, who has just had his son stolen, and Bulma, who believes she is rescuing her close friend from an abusive man is really cool. And the lack of communication leading to the doctor's death, and probable future tragedies works.
I also really like all the little details of hidden messages and tail sign language. And the way Bardock uses his sense of smell to hunt down Goku's kidnappers is really interesting too.
I know a good review is supposed to be balanced, but I didn't see anything that bothered me enough to mention. I really hope you're still continuing this, because I'd love to see where it goes from here.
| Batman Fanatic chapter 12 . 9/11
Please update soon!
| trebeh chapter 4 . 6/11
At least he'll get a boost in power once his bones heal due to the Saiyan zenkai ability. You should have Bardock train Goku to master his Oozaru (great ape) form.
| tomorrow4eva chapter 12 . 4/20
Coming soon: Bulma vs Bardock?!
| Lyore chapter 3 . 4/10
wait...goku takes no damage from bullet and nearly everything but Bardock need only to trowing him to the ground for breaking his bones and make him unconscious?
| a huge fan chapter 12 . 3/26
MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR I NEED MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE
seriously though, great fanfic
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/8
Bardock is quite clever, isn't he?
| Guest chapter 5 . 1/8
At least he has a reason for everything he does. He just looks like a psychopath doing it.
| Sakuraus chapter 12 . 11/30/2014
This one of the best Bardock, Goku fics I have read. A almost realistic clash of cultures of how to raise a child. We see Goku's friends point of view of Bardock and Bardock's view of them. And Bardock being an alien Saiyan , a race of fighters his view is way different from a human. And none of them understanding each other, yet all of them caring about Goku. Looking forward for more, hope you continue soon , :)
| Judaphine chapter 12 . 11/5/2014
Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work! :)
| PixelezOtaku chapter 12 . 10/30/2014
| shadowxxx chapter 12 . 9/26/2014
thank you great god goku ive wished to see this story continued since i 1st read it
| BartWLewis chapter 12 . 9/24/2014
| Tundris chapter 12 . 9/22/2014
I'm so glad that this story is still running! I'm love the newest chapters and as always, I'm in love with the way you portray Bardock, not fearing to bring out the ruthlessness that so many other stories on this site like to avoid. The sharp contrast between his and Bulma's respective ways of viewing the world is interesting and the interaction between the characters has been awesome to look at. I'm looking forward to seeing where you will take this amazing story!
| Diablo Snowblind chapter 11 . 9/19/2014
Oh my god this needs to be updated. This is the most compelling DBZ story I've ever seen.