Reviews for Let Me Help You
mcamastow chapter 30 . 2/27
Well writen story what would happen if kids had to raised themselves good insight.
Untitled chapter 30 . 1/13
I think you should wrap this story up.
It isn't that it's bad or anything like that. I love your storyline, the plot and development of the characters. It's a great read and I've been staying up all night for two days now just because I like the story.
But not all things last forever as I've found in a good read. And over time, I realised that if it had continued for much longer, it would have been ruined. So leave it as it is for now, wrap up the loose ends and start something new. Of course it's up to you as the author. I really enjoyed this fanfiction and thank you for that-giving me a good break from the day just to sit down and read enen something as perverse as this lol). In all seriousness I started reading this for a series of sex scenes involving Max and Fang. I've found something of much more essence and life to it, and I'd like to thank you for that too.
Now I'm probably bordering on hypocrisy here with all this rambling. But seriously, you did an amazing job of this. Hope to see more writing from you in the future.
mat chapter 30 . 12/27/2014
Just saying to all the jerks out there, yall are the ones who read it. You knew what it was about before you started if you didn't like it why did continue. Personally I like this story, you are an amazing wrighter and people are just cruel. I'm so sorry you had to go through this.
ELLI.SKY.ALEX chapter 30 . 11/21/2014
Continue. ..
ELLI.SKY.ALEX chapter 3 . 11/20/2014
yeay!
Guest chapter 11 . 8/26/2014
Alright, sexual ignorance I get. But the all alround ignorance and stupidity is just annoying.
desperatelyobvious chapter 30 . 7/4/2014
I know you haven't updated in 456ever, and I'm not even really sure if this story is still 'alive', but as whacked as this story is, I'd have to agree with you on how the flock was going to find out about puberty. Although a lot of these scenarios are an exaggeration for story's sake, I honestly can't imagine them getting everything perfectly or not accidentally doing something taboo or inappropriate. Especially since Max, Fang and Iggy are all the same age; I've always wondered how Iggy learned to control his hormones, even if he wasn't attracted to Max. Like, just anyone of the opposite gender your age would pose an awkward problem if you're developing these urges and feelings you don't understand. You put just the right amount of awkward, so I appreciate not everything about this is sexual. Also, that last chapter was like a punch in the gut. :))) I mean, now that they know better and know the meaning of sex, it changes everything. Because if they hadn't known, they could have just passed it off as curiosity, but now? /Damn./ I hope you still decide to continue or finish this by tying up loose ends, even though it's been a while. Happy writing!
Kasey chapter 4 . 5/25/2014
You disgusting pedophile. I'm 14 (I turned fourteen in March) and even if you were never given the talk ( I wasn't) any kid would still know this stuff. I want to report this story, child pornography is a crime you know. I actually feel abused
Rose chapter 30 . 5/4/2014
What is with chapter 30?
DarkLordHerobrine chapter 4 . 3/14/2014
Yeah, I feel that this is what would realistically happen with the Flock.
Phoenix's Inferno chapter 30 . 2/10/2014
interpretation: they finally did it! or it was a dream... update soon! –
JessamineHerondale chapter 18 . 1/9/2014
I know that you have finished this fanfic and all but I just wanted to let you know that the ought this fanfic I have noticed you use the antics way too much! just a tip!
JessamineHerondale chapter 12 . 1/9/2014
I'm sorry to say this. But, before Maximum ride James Patterson wrote the novels this was based on it was call When The Wind Blows And The Lake House. In When the Wind Blows Max-is still max Fang-is called Ozymandias Iggy - is Icarus and so on. But Max meets a kid at school and takes him on a date. She takes him on a flight and while the kid is riding on her back he tries to feel her up. He was soon Dissapointed because she had the breasts of birds. So... No boobs. Max shouldn't be having boobs. I don't have a problem with this in the story, it's just incorrect when it comes to the books.
faximum2.14 chapter 30 . 12/10/2013
Hey please continue
0FalconWings0 chapter 30 . 11/22/2013
Continue!
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