|Reviews for In Care Of|
| liz.barden chapter 16 . 13h ago
A really good story, well done!
| Yusuke Urameshi - Mazoku chapter 16 . 3/5
| watermelon-shotput chapter 16 . 2/26
I would like to thank you for how true to the original characters you have written this. In my experience, sadness and grief are heavy burdens to bear. In this case, you have shown a true understanding of humanity and employed a incredibly effective manner of showing it. It was an amazing story to read and I hope to relive it again and again. Thank you.
| girlwonder113 chapter 14 . 2/9
Oh my gosh I'm crying, real tears are in my eye Snape and Dumbledore and Harry -oh poor Harry just... Wow. I'm not making much sense but great story seriously.
| gawwd chapter 16 . 2/7
F*cking amazing. No questions asked.
| Guest chapter 16 . 2/4
I really loved your fanficton !
| SphinxScribe chapter 16 . 2/2
First of all, I would like to point out that I never review lightly. In fact, I'm usually one of those annoying people who are so picky about fanfics that if there are any grammatical errors or if the characters are even slightly OOC, I abandon it. I just can't deal with stories like that (which is why I never, ever do coffee-shop AUs *shudder*). And when I do truly, truly like a fanfic, it's usually just a press to the favorite button.
...But this story blew me away. Firstly, the characters are strikingly true to their original forms, so much so that although the scenario was obviously non-canon, I could see it playing in my head as if it had truly transpired in J.K. Rowling's universe. The characters' flow of logic made sense, their behavior was consistent with their personalities, and there were no plot-holes (another round of applause there). Secondly, in addition to your grammar being faultless, the complexity and variation of your sentences and the pure emotion that was present within the narration made it appeal to the heart. I felt like I could empathize with both Snape and Harry (and Dumbledore). There are few, few fanfics that I have ever become emotionally invested in. Congratulations; yours has succeeded.
I notice that you have not updated the sequel recently, and while I understand that real life can be rough, I nevertheless still hope that you will find the time and inspiration to continue the series. You are a fantastic writer; I don't know if you plan to pursue a career in writing, but you certainly have the talent. If it's a passion for you, don't stop writing. Your works are a pleasure to read.
Best wishes and an apology for the sappiness of this review,
| paskinmath chapter 16 . 1/30
| Guest chapter 16 . 1/29
Ahhhh! That's so sweet!
| Speechless chapter 16 . 1/27
As writers, we all want our viewers to take something from an ending- whether it be humor, a lasting sense on the heart, a wrenching of the emotions, or a speechlessness to the mind. You've accomplished all of them.
| Justa Girl3 chapter 14 . 1/21
This story made me cry omg I'm sitting here crying so hard you are such an amazing writer
| Post U Later chapter 16 . 1/5
Aww How Cute! Snape Stayed To Watch Over Harry In Bat Form. He's Also Probably Not Used To Sleeping Without Harry There Now. Which Is Pretty Adorable. XD
"Hang on a minute, You bit me!"
"I beg your pardon, Mr. Potter! A teacher would never-"
"Actually bit me!"
"It's not as if I could take points, Potter, and considering you were pilfering in my potions stores-"
"Yeah, well... I had to clean up your newspaper everyday, anyway, so I guess we're even."
-Oh Merlin! YES! I Laughed So Freaking Hard! I Was Wondering If Harry Or Snape Would Bring That Up. Geez, I Wonder How They Explained That To Poppy. XD
Really Great Story! I'm Going To Start On The Sequel Right Away! X3
| Post U Later chapter 15 . 1/5
Oh Poor Harry, At Least The Wounds Are Gone So Poppy Wont Ask Where They Came From.
I Love How Snape's Acting. Like When He Said That Spartacus Comment To Harry To Get Him To Lie Down, I Nearly 'Aww'd' When He Blushed. XD
| Post U Later chapter 14 . 1/5
Oh Man, Those Three. I Feel So Bad For Them. Harry's Greatest Secret Has Come Out, To His Most Hated Professor & Now He's Also Found Out That All He's Gone Though Has Been For Nothing. Dubledore's Found Out The Most Horrible Thing He Ever Possibly Could, Probably Worse Than If Voldemort Had Become Minister Of Magic, & Snape's Seeing His Mentor Break Down Along With Lily's Son. This Has To Be All Three Of Theirs Worst Day Imaginable(Except Maybe When Snape Found Lily's Body).
| Post U Later chapter 13 . 1/4
Thank Merlin! Harry's Free From Those Monsters! But I Can't Believe That He Thinks That Dumbledore Would Think He Deserves To Be Punished In Such A Way & That He Sends Him Back There Knowing That He's Treated In Such A Terrible Fashion. Poor Harry.