Reviews for Kiki The Healer
Inanari chapter 13 . 3/6/2014
I feel bad for Sean...he's lonely...
Slytherin Studios chapter 21 . 10/22/2013
I love your story, please update soon.
Blueharu2-12 chapter 21 . 8/28/2013
PLEASE UPDATEEEE :'(
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 21 . 3/19/2013
Please write more T_T
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 19 . 3/19/2013
...married into the Akatsuki? Don't tell me...the ring's on her left hand on the finger to the right of the pinkie? The wedding finger? XD Niiiiccceeee...still loving Deidara! And damn, she can't write? O_O So she basically has no means of communication. That SUCKS. Anyway, awesome chapter :D See you in the next review! Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 18 . 3/19/2013
She's not here?! O_O 3 F's? Well then...she better not come back for a while! Don't worry! You're corrections are fine :) I loved this chapter _ I hope she becomes close with Kisame! Can't wait till the next chapter! See you next review! Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 17 . 3/19/2013
Deidara is the best, I swear. D'awwww, he carried her and saved her from Hidan-bitch! I can't wait for Kiki to meet Kisame! It feels more like those two, plus Itachi, would have a brother-sister relationship! :D The ones I think wouldn't be TOO fond of her are...Kakuzu, Konan, and Pein. I just can't see them falling all over her. Maybe having...an attachment, a fondness but not necessarily any type of special bond or friendship. Nope. Can't see it. Oh well. Your story. Anyway! Loved this chapter especially! :D Excellent so far! I look forward to the next one! See you next review. Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 16 . 3/19/2013
Lol. I loved Deidara's reaction to Kiki! It was absolutely adorable. I'm gonna take a wild guess and say that person screaming was Hidan - Whiny biatchhh...his fault for falling in the damn hole anyhow. Oh well. I'm guessing Pein might have found out about Sean, Kiki's demon, or something...but what else could it be? I don't know o.o sorry to say. Don't have much guesses besides Sean. Anyway! Again, I enjoyed this chapter very much so! See you next review Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 15 . 3/19/2013
I like it mainly because you added Zetsu :P Heheh. I enjoyed Deidara making fun of Hidan and enjoyed reading Kakuzu's thoughts on Kiki cuddling closer to him. It was so cute! He's such an awkward war turtle! XD I wonder what shall happen in the next chapter :O I'm actually kinda/kinda not relieved she is finally captured. Being captured is never a good thing but she's been running for awhile now and i'm just sitting here waiting for it to happen xD So, there's the next step to the story! Can't wait to read the next :) See you next review! Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 14 . 3/19/2013
Ohhhh, down a hole he fell xD Haha! GOOD. I didn't like Hidan much either ;) He killed Asuma sooo...SUFFER. Well it was a good chapter! Almost had me believing Hidan would capture her at last but honestly, I should know better. Haha. But Kakuzu? Weird xD Hidan's going to be so pissed that he spent all that time running and falling down into an abyss of foulness that I don't even want to begin to imagine while Kakuzu just found her dead on the ground like that. Lol Oh money-maker! What luck you have :) Good chapter! See you next review! Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 13 . 3/19/2013
I choose 1). Now on to my review! WHAT HAPPENED TO HIDAN?! XD He was so close! Did he get caught in her genjutsu?! lol! If he did, that'd be so funny since he was the closest to capture her but then she slipped through his fingers quite literally and escaped again! I hope...anyway, about Sean...I seem to understand now why he is the way he is and I even begin to see why he yearns for Kiki with such longing and greed. She's the last pure thing of the Shinobi World. And he needs her. I feel sorry for him now. Sigh. But that doesn't mean I like him now. I still don't think he should destroy all of humanity because despite that a lot of them are no longer innocent, that doesn't mean that there aren't those who are still pure of heart left. Naruto is one! :D And Hinata! :D Annndddd...someone else...hmmm...must make a list...OH! Kakashi! :D Anyway, another awesome chapter! I really enjoyed it :) See ya in the next review! :3 Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 12 . 3/19/2013
My mind is already twisted...T_T This story is very good but it also makes my mind tired! I need to sleep or take a break from all this intense reading xD Hidan is so funny. Huh...where is Hidan anyway? Hmm...maybe he's approaching her from the front? He's going to be all like, "HEY BITCH! Screw all this fucking sneaking and hopping and dancing around! You better fucking come quietly or I swear by Jashin-sama, I'll beat the shit out of you! HEY, DON'T IGNORE ME! GET BACK HERE!" OH WAIT...didn't he go in a completely different direction than Deidara and Kakuzu? Did they not bother to go after him and tell him he's going the wrong way? XD Must find out! Another awesome chapter! See you in the next review! Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
So much reading O_O And yes, it is a very quiet story but still, I like it :) It's just odd having Hidan so...quiet in a way. Same with Kakuzu, Kisame and Deidara. Zetsu, Konan, Pein, Itachi...those characters are basically very quiet, so that's no surprise. But anyway, I like your story. And you do have a point with the appearance being ordinary and stuff. Unlike my main OC who I use as the character for most of my fan fics, has light blue hair, kind of like ice and cobalt blue eyes. Hell, if Sakura can have bubble gum pink hair and turquoise eyes, then my character can be blue if she wants to. Except in fan fics that have actually people in it and is not an anime. In that case, I make her have black hair and blue eyes. A lot of people seem to like that combination. Hmm...I should use brown more often though...it IS more realistic xD I'm better with personality then appearance so whatever! I like this chapter also! Keep up the good work and I will see you in my next review! Ciao :3
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 10 . 3/19/2013
So her demon's name is Sean who has an angelic brother...? That creepy ass bastard. Zetsu better kick his butt if he dares try to force Kiki to bear his child. And she only promised a kiss. Nothing else. Ugh, god, he's creepy! Yuck. Lol anyway, it's a good chapter nonetheless. Part of me is hoping that the one who picked up Kiki was Zetsu :) Just cause I love him! But I'm curious to see who it is! :D See ya next review ;3 Ciao
Lonerwolf1015 chapter 9 . 3/19/2013
Kisame and Deidara's opinion of Kiki is by far the best. And Hidan, oh my lord, how funny that was! xD Just imagining Hidan face planted into the grass and spitting out blades of grass made me laugh so hard out loud, I had to muffle my laughter cause...well, i'm supposed to be asleep right now but WHO CARES? Anyway :D I like how you make her someone who knows jutsu and genjutsu but doesn't make her a total expert on it despite having God-like powers and doesn't even know any fighting jutsu! Very impressive :) I don't know how many reviews I posted but I hope you might begin to change your mind about discontinuing this story. Well hell, I don't even know if you come online anymore...so you might not even see these reviews and I might be wasting my time...but if you do still come online, I must keep posting so that you see that I am a dedicated fan! That's that! See you next review ;D Ciao
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