|Reviews for Unrequited|
| An Author's Pen chapter 5 . 3/30/2011
I like this story a lot. Will Tom ever use legilimancy on Dumbledore? Keep writing, please.
| Saij Emrys chapter 5 . 1/5/2011
LOVE IT! Any plans for updating soon? Pretty please? I'm saving this to my favorites and can't wait to see how Dumbledore's and Tom's "relationship" progress. Well done!
| XxblondehermionexX chapter 5 . 4/17/2010
This is great. You've given both Dumbledore and Voldemort depth of character. I hope this isn't abandoned.
| Polar Deer chapter 5 . 11/1/2009
Great story, engaging and very plausible. The reveal of Dumbledore's relationship with Grindelwald and his sexuality had some serious implications regarding Dumbledore and Tom; it's nice to see someone has the sense to point that out when the author doesn't.
| Writting2StayHalfSane chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
Wow. This is really good so far. You're a great writer. :)
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 5 . 8/3/2009
I'm so glad you updated the story. I've missed it.
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 3 . 4/14/2009
Chilling, indeed. As is the odd chemistry between Tom and Albus. And dang if you didnt' capture Minerva's spirit as a youth perfectly. Loved her here, and I could see her clear as crystal. Slughorn the same-what I wouldn't give to see you try your hand at a Teacher's Lounge set of stories, all dealing with Hogwarts faculty throughout the years! You really do write hefty intellect and pomposity well-that's totally supposed to be a compliment.
Your Albus and Tom are very intriguing. Off to read more.
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 4 . 4/5/2009
Excellent chapter. You really do Tom very well. He's creepily fascinating. You characterization of Slughorn as a jealous bitch is masterful.
| RavenclawRebel chapter 3 . 3/26/2009
This was a great chapter! Sorry my reviews are really generic.. I've just been drained these past couple of weeks... :)
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot chapter 2 . 3/26/2009
I dig this. Really, I do. It feels like you've given Dumbledore an awakening of sorts through his young pupil/protegee . . . that he's sort of been in a magical stupor or whatnot for awhile, and Tom's inquiries are giving him a chance to interact with a "worthy" wizard, one who's intellect and curiosity could be developed by AD's own hand, and not let it get out of control *coughLikeGellertcoughcough*.
Er . . . I hope that's what you're going for. It certainly felt like it to me.
Sara, don't you think that this is beyond the characterizations. This isn't. I think it really fits in with what JKR told us about these characters, extrapolation aside.
| Sel chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
I'm quite intrigued with this. I like the cat and mouse relationship between Albus and Tom, but who is the cat and who is the mouse? I bet both of them would guess wrong.
| werewolfsfan chapter 3 . 3/25/2009
Ah! Another wonderful and yet creepy chapter in your fascinating tale. Your characterizations are truly outstanding. I haven’t read many fics where the author tries to characterize Voldemort, as Rowling didn’t either. Tom Riddle sparks my interest though and I’m thoroughly into your portrayal here.
I’ve read a fair few stories where Dumbledore plays a big role and my favorite’s are the ones that show the complexity of his character and magic.
I’m am thrilled with this tale so far. I don’t think there is a misstep anywhere. It’s a totally fascinating and engrossing read. Also, it could be a canon “missing moment” so far …..
| Rita Arabella Black chapter 3 . 3/24/2009
Excellent story. Here I am feeling trite trying to come up with the right superlatives. I cannot wait to read more.
| RavenclawRebel chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
This is a great idea! I loved this!
| Bad Mum chapter 2 . 3/18/2009
Nicely done. You've handled Tom's eagerness - which he's trying to hide - very well. And Albus' isentification with him is very believable. Looking forward to more.