Reviews for Sacred Trust
BloodRaevynn chapter 1 . 6/28/2009
It's a really good fic, although it's kinda weird that you used the Japanese titles but then Chinese for "I love you."
Karmira chapter 1 . 6/10/2009
How can no one review this story? It was fabulous, especially the ending. You are very harsh in the end with the parents, but I think it works. They're loading all the pain of their loss on him, since he's pretending to be her. Also, more painfully, the boy is more important in the culture. You showed that side really well. The love between the two was very potent.

The only place I think about criticizing is sentence length. Break up the sentences to add more power to key parts. It also adds variety.

Wonderful story!