|Reviews for Open Window|
| chloe chapter 1 . 8/14/2015
Awww very very very realistic writing for the characters, light years better in quality compared to the original books. I love the theme and every thing of twilight but the writing is awful isn't it? childish and hard to read. Then you come online and read some of the fanfiction and its astounding, the difference in quality.
This piece was perfect, the tone of bella and edward, the limits of the characters and the dialogue,
Would like to see your interpretation of the story going forward. Loved the whole thin x
| polyphany chapter 1 . 8/20/2013
| DarklingLinny chapter 1 . 1/11/2013
Oh, Edward. Ever the tease...
| belle chapter 1 . 11/9/2012
you idiot! haven't you read the novel ? Edward is not that stupid as you think mongrel
| roha chapter 1 . 11/8/2012
| Reader Enthusist chapter 1 . 8/30/2012
That was amazing
| xXKiwiCullenXx chapter 1 . 1/25/2010
Aw...I love it! You didn't take it too far, but it was definitely a scene that was missing from the book!
| tweak1988 chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
it was perfect, i like how their struggle to be together is shown in this story, that part in the book made me mad, how Edward did that to Bellas truck to keep her from seeing Jake, but i understand why he did it...i guess, lol
anyways great story. :)
| RCD-Alice chapter 1 . 11/2/2009
This is another great one-shot!
So, just keep it up!
| Merina Thropp chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
aw thats sweet
| twilightobsessed40873a chapter 1 . 9/22/2009
I love it
| xtina-chan chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
I loved this :D It was cute.. and wicked funny.
“You’re acting like a child, Bella.”
“Sorry if I’m not over the hill like yourself.” I fire back.
“Perhaps it’s best that I leave, before you waken Charlie.” Edward suggested.
“Why not, you’re good at it.”
That is my fave part :D lmao. I was like oh no she didn't! haha. Great job hon! Faved :D
| r2i0s0s9a chapter 1 . 7/13/2009
i thought it was good. it wasn't bad in any way. and no, you don't have to write another one. it was perfect
| Aria-Masen chapter 1 . 6/15/2009
Now we know what REALLY happened! hahaha i like this new side of bella and the battle of being pissed off at him and yet still faithfully and uncontrolibly loving him, its sweet and portrays her in a slightly diffrent light but still has her origanal role/personality. i like it. you did a great job you should do more twilight.
| charlee13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
wow that was good