Reviews for Absolute Zero: The Azure Moon
Snorkackle chapter 9 . 6/11/2011
This story is badass, just as Sit Upon the Frozen Heavens was, although I found that story much too short and little to AU. I like how you managed to incorporate two movies into the plot and main "thing" like how by doing what he did (creating Hitsugaya), Naruto made a glitch that caused Hyorinmaru to bond with another, and the Senna thing was cool as well, although with Naruto being as bad ass as he was, I'm suprised he didn't save her in time (.
Impstar chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
This is indeed a worthy sequel to an awesome story. You really can put emotion into your stories. There were at least 2 times that I actually shed tears. I look forward to the next update. This easily makes it into the top 3 Naruto/Bleach crossovers of mine.
RightArmCannon chapter 9 . 6/3/2011
Great story! I just think at one point in this story, Naruto should fuze with Hyorinmaru like he did in the Sit Upon the Frozen Heavens.
ShatteredHeartX chapter 9 . 6/1/2011
I am a big fan of your work, awesome
mist shadow chapter 9 . 5/22/2011
damn, I am afraid of what you gonna do with the forgetting hollows. that will be a riot
mist shadow chapter 8 . 5/21/2011
damn, so that's why the flood occurred *ponders* ah well, good version for this universe.

heh, Ichigo skipped being beaten bu Grimmjow and nearly killed twice by Ulqiorra, and was forced straight into Hollowification. poor guy. though, you didn't give the Hollow to get some breath back (there was some time in canon, and his grasp on hollow powers increased bit by piece, ah well, he always performed better in life-or-death situations). but you had to throw Rukia into the mix, didn't you? wonder what Nel's reaction is gonna be
mist shadow chapter 7 . 5/21/2011
*reads in satisfaction, comes up to Ichigo breaking apart... *bangs head on a table* idiot *face-palm* Shiro, you should have just possessed him at that moment. or whispered "kill the blue bastard". in that moment Ichigo would've listened *sigh* (or were you hurling sick at the mushiness at that moment?) well, at least he wasn't hurt as badly as in canon. stupid git
mist shadow chapter 6 . 5/21/2011
damn, you just had to go and change it a little bit, didn't you? (btw, not a flame). you know in original canon movie, nobody remembered what happened after, it all faded same as Senna did. so in this story, the name will probably stay, but nobody will remember why and since when

question, if Hinata is a Captain (which division?) then who's taking care of the space Aizen left? Is she Cap of div 5? who's her vice then?

lol to Matsumoto
mist shadow chapter 5 . 5/20/2011
now I remembered where Mayuri was. as well as couple of other people.

you know, the first thing Rukia saw when she opened her eyes was the brown cloak, and then everything else. and she could only see him clutching the handle of his sword. and his first words were "Yo!" always makes laugh at how he never notices how his hollow is actually so much like him. and that scene with Rukia getting thrown always makes laugh, especially the reaction and their faces. priceless

damn, battle between those two - epic. and to think that they are just having fun and having rivalry skirmish instead of getting serious and battling to the death. just shows that Ichigo has potential, but he has miles to grow yet, though he did better than in canon (Naruto managed to teach him Kudo? impressive), but he still got too overconfident and got pushed by his hollow. *sigh*
mist shadow chapter 4 . 5/20/2011
mostly canon. heh, didn't get the stand off at the end of the chapter, till I remembered that Zaraki broke the Ryoka out and how the other captains and vice-captains reacted. was Mayuri even at the execution in canon, I can't remember what he did
Robyntalks chapter 9 . 5/19/2011
Hi James! Great story.

the only critic or question I have is about this last chapter. I thought the purple Hyorinmaru belonged to Namikaze Minato. He was using it in the prequal to this story. Anyway, love this story. Thanks for all your hard work.

Love, Robyn.
Ralmidaz chapter 9 . 5/13/2011
plz update soon

don't mind movie chapters, but i prefer the normal ones.

Love the making Rukia a hollow idea
mist shadow chapter 3 . 5/11/2011
almost same as canon, though maybe Ichigo has a better understanding of his Zanpaktou. or maybe he makes the same mistake of relying too much on learning opponents' techniques, as he doesn't have enough battle experience to make his own.

*sigh* I'm so not IchiRuki. I believe that she's just a friend. And that Ichigo is just a type of guy to go full out to protect his family, friends and those he considers under his protection one way or another (that ghost of a girl in ch1?). I really think that he isn't interested in Rukia romantically, she's just a representation of a huge change in his life, nothing more, nothing less. *sigh* oh well, that's my opinion. and 'm trying to skip cheezy romantic parts as much as I can. no offense
mist shadow chapter 2 . 5/10/2011
heh, Ichigo's progress is astounding and awe inspiring. and exponential and unbelievable. from normal point of view :D. he's still slower than your Naruto. but Naruto does have an advantage - he was trained and always knew he would be a shinobi, Ichigo only had some formal training in kendo, other experience is from street brawls
mist shadow chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
you know, you should've left Tessai's reaction to Orihime's open admiration of the cave. was a funny scene XD

and Ichigo is still as reckless *face palm* though he's a 15 year old male, who gets picked on a lot, what else d'u expect?

oh, a shogi game, huh? and it's easy to see when steps are taken that don't belong to the 2 of them, that don't fit the pattern. though, I wonder why nobody reacted to unknown entity having the haori of a missing Captain

oh oh, was wondering why you put the whole fight with Ikkaku. heh, considering his growth rate, he is much more prepared than if he was trained only by Urahara. Kage Bunshin is definitely a big help there. or least it would be if used properly, oh well, he does need practise
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