Reviews for Mastermind
James Birdsong chapter 4 . 9/20/2009
PokehTurtle chapter 4 . 7/29/2009
Hey Zero it's Kuuji. Found your story the other day, so now I'll drop a review. First the nit picky stuff. The grammar in some sentences is incorrect in small places, and occasionally I feel that you over use words to describe the characters. Like in the first chapter, you used "The Traitor" twice in the same sentence to describe him. It just felt a little awkward. That's all I've got to say on that for now, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
Phanax Leminer chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Interresting point of view of how the Shadows break loss and who was behind all this. I like it.