|Reviews for Mastermind|
| Dash master 48 chapter 1 . 7/19/2016
Mastermind, is that you?
Oh lord, they got so pissed off about losing Edmund they travelled back to when Terra Venture was exploring the Galaxy and are now wreaking havoc!
| James Birdsong chapter 4 . 9/20/2009
| PokehTurtle chapter 4 . 7/29/2009
Hey Zero it's Kuuji. Found your story the other day, so now I'll drop a review. First the nit picky stuff. The grammar in some sentences is incorrect in small places, and occasionally I feel that you over use words to describe the characters. Like in the first chapter, you used "The Traitor" twice in the same sentence to describe him. It just felt a little awkward. That's all I've got to say on that for now, and I'm looking forward to the rest of the story.
| Phanax Leminer chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Interresting point of view of how the Shadows break loss and who was behind all this. I like it.