|Reviews for First Blood|
| BabyDragon365 chapter 1 . 9/24/2011
i like how he finally calls her by her name but she's already asleep lol great story : )
| katkah chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Well, all I have to say is wow. It was really greatly described, I mean the feelings and all. One wonders if you tried before;P
It was agreat fic, I like this pairing.
| nighttheraven chapter 1 . 9/8/2010
I lOvEd it! It was creppy how he always smiled that smile and ReAlLy yummy because of the vampire sex. Dont worry about it being creppy, if he didnt smile crepplily then he would be OOC.
| Elane217 chapter 1 . 7/22/2010
agreed, this story needs a better ending, and I wish I could tell you what that is so you could write it but can't. Don't you hate that? Knowing something needs to be fixed but not knowing what to replace it with. Anyway, the other 97% of the story was top notch! good job :D
| KikoTakahashi chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
that was very good and well writen i thought the ending was good it seemed to suit the story to me
| Ded-nvr-lvng-vmpr chapter 1 . 12/31/2009
That was perfect. Not kidding. It was just perfect. One of the best I've scene for a first in a year...and I've been around. You should do Hellsing lemons more often.
The ending went rather well actually. If you hadn't said anything, I wouldn't have noticed. Still can't see what you mean.
| shadowkittygrim chapter 1 . 12/27/2009
Good job :O
Good grammar, good detail :)
Keep up the good work!
| StormWolf91 chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
You did a good job at writing Seras' thoughts, here :D
| Nina the Vampire chapter 1 . 11/18/2009
one of the best lemons I've ever read. honestly.
| Amber chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
Hi, i am amber, or Inulover365. However, i not only love Inuyasha, but Hellsing, Ouran high school, Fruits Basket, and manny other Animes/Mangas. I love your story! I think it is so kool! I have a user on . My user's name is Inulover365. Look me up! Read my storyz, create a user, and write me! Become my friend, give me feedback, and messige me! I hope you do this! I would like u to b my friend, my other friends r: veggitailsrawx, inuchan, Xxjolteon9xX, ChantathedogDemon, and Sammy95. U can find me on there friends list, click on view all friends. And you'll probly me. I am a girl, and a huge Lemon fan. Hope you rite me on there. I cheek it often. Write me soon.
| luckey7indy4 chapter 1 . 9/16/2009
damn good, i loved it
| ultimatebishoujo21 chapter 1 . 9/10/2009
yay alucard and seras did it
| The Angel Of Ruin chapter 1 . 8/18/2009
i love it! maybe a sequal could do a little saying for the end...?
cuz i love the detail of it all in general when she described her feeling of being a vamp now and how it all goes.
| crimsonwolf333 chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
| XavierFox chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
That was wonderful! I'm looking forward to your next story.