Reviews for How it all began
KShade chapter 5 . 2/20/2012
alvuxzddgxr chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
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TheOrangeHoBo chapter 5 . 11/25/2009
YOU SHOULD CALL HIM EMERY! the story is awesome so far
Never. Shout. Valeria chapter 5 . 11/10/2009
Sexyrockbabe234 chapter 4 . 7/30/2009
Wow, I love this story. Keep going, please!

I think it's a great idea to show Neferet's past.

Keep on writing.
turquoiseflame chapter 6 . 7/20/2009
I really like this story, you write very well but in some parts I don't think the language used is apropriate for the time in which the story is set. For example, words like 'yeah' and 'thanks' are a little too modern. Other than that, it's a great story and I like the idea. I hope you find the time to update soon. x
AshleyAnne55 chapter 3 . 5/22/2009
the memories are perfect that she goes through. almost like you know what its like to go through abuse but its very well written. that thing you said before with every review comes a new chapter better be applicable here as well. ill be sad if you dont writght any further into these
AshleyAnne55 chapter 2 . 5/22/2009
she takes to the change so quickly where as so many kinda refuse it at first. different but nice
AshleyAnne55 chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
this story leaves at the perfect time i think. it leaves with so much mystery. very niceD
desvulalleb chapter 5 . 4/24/2009
OOH! I like all of the names. It's so hard to choose. I think that I like the names Emery or Emmanuel the best, though. Please keep writing. I really like the plot for this story. It's very unusual! It gets tiring when all of the fanfics have basically the same storyline.
Amorah Leigh chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
aw! Im totally bummed but I completely understand, exams suck! I have my exams this week also. Anyway i hope you do well and please update as soon as possible! I know I've said this before but I love neferet! I was heart broken when she ended up evil and I think the story your doing in her perspective is completely awesome! Good luck with your exams :-)
Thalia-Luke chapter 6 . 4/21/2009
oh:( thats okay. good luck on your exams and stuff. cant wait till you up-date (when you can):)

your friend,

NyxNightGoddess1 chapter 5 . 4/20/2009
I think Vaughn suits him.

NyxNightGoddess1 chapter 4 . 4/20/2009
Sorry it's taken me so long to review.

I've just been busy with somethings...
Just.Another.Cullen.Girl.15 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
I really like Emery and Blaine for sexy raven haried guy...

Hurry up and update or I'll cry :0(
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