|Reviews for Memories Can't Hide|
| Rainpath chapter 2 . 3/21/2009
Very interesting story!
| Atila chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Nice job, very good writing :) A suggestion I might make, though, is to keep the 'pre' material to a minimum the next time you write a story - it's generall considered dull and you don't want to drive away your readers when they're first starting to read it. Secondly, I saw from your other story that your name is Aly, like your character... which for most people points to a mary-sue: I'd keep clear of writing those if I were you. But other than that, good job and keep writing!