Reviews for Cognition
naash chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
wow that was beautiful and deep.

Lionasha No Bruja chapter 1 . 7/23/2010
I really, really like this. Team Gai doesn't get enough love, and this rang really true for me. It's well written, succinct and clear.

(Also, bonus points for use of the word 'chunter'- although I wonder how many other Americans know it! _)
BingoZero chapter 1 . 3/24/2009
This one is nice too. You have a real knack for these theme snippit chapters. You have a really good eye for character traits that go left unspoken in the story.
JanuaryFriend chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Wow. If this is truly your first Team Gai story, I must say that you have done a fantastic job!

The characters emotions were spot-on, and you described both them and their relationships very well. Such personality, all fit into this tiny little fic.. Very nice.

From a writer's standpoint, the title was brilliant, and the prose that you used was simply beatiful. Are you an auditory learner like Lee?

The ending was superb, fiting well with the rest of the story while adding just the right touch of bittersweetness...

I'm afraid that I cannot offer you any constructive criticism.

In short, I absolutely loved the whole thing! Thanks for such a fabulous read!
sophia666 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
I LOVED this. especially Tenten. :)
akatsukiLEE chapter 1 . 3/17/2009
That was really good and well written.