Reviews for Tragic love at the night club
nicolerools chapter 1 . 2/20/2010
i was acting suprised at how good i was &i like the ending :)
Lady Nerd chapter 1 . 10/31/2009
I think you should write shorter paragraphs, and proofread. And it's kind of melodramatic... there wasn't much warning for what was going to happen.
VampGrl1234 chapter 1 . 4/10/2009
omg that was sad. i cryed. ur amazing!
kittenyumi chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Oh my goah great great story you should so do a actually made me cry :(
A Beautiful Oblivion chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
OK I have two questions for you

1. Do you have spell check?

2. Did you even read it over? I found at least 15 spelling/grammer errors!

This story would have been amazing if you made paragraphs and spell checked. Now I give it a 3 out of 5. Sheesh.
LogicalTiger chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Um, no offense, but please proofread a bit more. Also, I'd like a longer story and a bit more detail so it's better to read.

Also, use proper capitalization in your title and proper grammer in your summary. Also, your summary should be about the plot and specify that this is a oneshot.
tdiharter chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
Yay! Great job! Write a sequal, PLEASE!
jjki2 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
that was beautiful. WRITE A SEQUAL!