|Reviews for Visitation|
| AnnaCovey chapter 7 . 4/18/2010
Haha, very good. not to constructive but I ought to go. Read more!
| AnnaCovey chapter 4 . 4/18/2010
Oh yeah, Wide Awake. This is really great, often all human fanfics gets on my nervs (not WA af course), but this one is really good. Looking forward to more.
| AnnaCovey chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
Burn! This is great.
| Simii chapter 16 . 4/7/2010
I just started reading your story and i love it! but now i am at the last posted chappie and it has been 2 months since it was posted ...please say your posting again soon?
| simii chapter 4 . 4/5/2010
lol as soon as i saw the unicorn reference i thought of Wide Awake indeed the best FF ever! I am really enjoying your story also :)
| Mariquilla chapter 16 . 4/4/2010
Great story, i like it very much!
| TwiRPLover chapter 16 . 4/4/2010
I am so glad to have found this fic! I love the fact that Charlie is being so good to Edward! Thank you for sharing! I look forward to your next update!
| IsaKassees chapter 9 . 3/30/2010
Officer Pattinson! Priceless!
| VerucaSalts chapter 16 . 3/28/2010
What a great story! Awesome plot and the writing is wonderful, looking forward to more!
| LovesTheHeat chapter 16 . 3/27/2010
I should have been reviewing every chapter... but I've been engrossed with reading.
This is a fabulous story. I'm really enjoying it. It's a really creative idea and Edward is terribly sweet. I love how Charlie is part of this too - most forget about him.
Please update soon! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
| necessarily chapter 10 . 3/24/2010
Hahaha! Did you mean to say "Officer Pattinson"?
| Lissagirl26 chapter 16 . 3/7/2010
charlie bonding with edward is perfect! its not something that will die at the first sign of trouble and a guy like that needs a good male influence in his life I can tell you that. My dad is a cop, and when my husband saved me from getting killed, my dad took a real interest in him. it has made such a difference for him, he never really had his dad around and his stepdad is a jerk. I was worried about us having a son because of this, but he has done great Ithink its because he models his choices with our son after my dad and brother.
| 09xuereba chapter 16 . 2/28/2010
as far as juvi goes edwards got it good :)
| 09xuereba chapter 4 . 2/28/2010
i'm always going ekk when unicorns are mention my cousin has a small obsession with them and when she telling me her little unicorn storie and imaginings (she is only 8) they come out all stutered and cute i totaly got the referance. lol bella gave edward a unicorn
| nothing-fbrbgvirjeng94y5t chapter 12 . 2/27/2010
I love this story, you manage to write a great indepth analysis of the characters state of mind and emotions without making it a list like some. It's just wierd with how much im loving this story. :D