|Reviews for My Last Breath|
| Phangirl chapter 1 . 11/16/2014
Damn. I had hoped it would end
She didn't thirst for water.
She thirsted for lemonade.
| ElleCullen17 chapter 1 . 11/13/2011
MORE!YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE! 3
| Soeder chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
uhm is this a one-shot ? because i would really like it if it wassent ! hope you continue it soon love from me! XD
| SiriusPotterFan1 chapter 1 . 3/30/2009
I've finally been able to review!
Good sentence structure. :)
I'd have to wait until the next chapter to fully understand the plot and be able to review it properly, but I think it'll be interesting to see how Bella takes on the entire Cullen family at once.
| UpYourCupcake chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
That last part was sweet...but it was also, dare I say...sexy?
This is a very interesting idea you have here...and even better that Edward changed her. I am eager to read on about how she deals with the fact that she is a vampire now.
Is this a one-shot? I hope not.
| One Lonely Marauder chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
I want to see more of this soon!
This is a wonderful story!
| jvestaj chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
I love this story, you should continue with it!
| Vixx-Hyuk93 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
love it D