Reviews for Putting Her Back Together
jessie4everhotmail.com chapter 14 . 12/17/2013
I read the story. I loved the detail but I cant help to wonder what would have happened if little Jacob lived would they share him?
Nicole1017always chapter 14 . 3/12/2013
It was awesome I got filled with suspense and excitement I loved it u need to write more cause honestly ur a writer who was just born from writing this story
vampyland chapter 14 . 3/13/2012
Tears felling from her eyes.

is that part of her power Or

You made a mistake ?

Cuz in twilight vamp can't cray I think. You know that though

Ps

Maybe it was my mistake and I need to read more carefully

I love your story by the way

Xxxxxxx

vampyland
Guest chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
good job on your stories
CanTigerucks chapter 6 . 9/1/2011
IMPRINTING STINKS AND IT'S THE WORST THING THAT EVERY HAPPENED IN THE TWILIGHT BOOKS!

I mean, Stephenie Meyer ruined the whole thing because she gave EVERYBODY a happy ending!

I thought Bella was supposed to give up having a family and having a child!

And i thought living after giving birth to a vampire child was suppose to kill her!

The ending was WAY too happy for my taste.

I thought love was supposed to be letting the one you love be happy I mean, look at Jacob!

He was supposed to kill Renesmee and yet HE ALSO got a happy ending by being a lovesick over protective puppy over Renesmee! IT WAS LIKE ALL THE FEELINGS HE HAD FOR BELLA VANISHED!

WHY DOES IMPRINTING EVEN CAME INTO STEPHENIE MEYER'S MIND!

Great story by the way.

:)
CanTigerucks chapter 4 . 9/1/2011
Now Bella just pisses me off! She could love Jacob but she don't want his baby?

IT'S HER BABY TOO!

It's a wonder how Jacob puts up with her...
pushmybuttons chapter 14 . 12/27/2010
Worst Fanfiction I have ever read..This story copied too much off Breaking Dawn and Eclipse. The ending was cool though..But seriously bad chapters before. Take this as advice. Don't write fanfiction that is crap. Sorry to be rude.
Brooklyn Marie chapter 14 . 11/27/2010
very good
Alice Cullen's best friend x chapter 10 . 9/4/2010
lol thats funny bella must be really slow and clumsy lol cos before it took her 3 hourse to walk to the meadow and apparantly its only 3 miles! Hahahahaha! I live 3 miles away from town and i walk there (to see my mum or my friends) all the time and it takes 45 mins!

lol

luvin it! xx
jj chapter 9 . 7/23/2010
wow...it's like realy messed up...so like

i think its retarded and personally i dont like bella but now i think she's a selfish tramp for not wanting jacobs i'm really all for jacobXoc. if i were you i would write it like how jacob imprints amd bella's all like lucy stay away from my man and stuff like that but i wouldn't make her pregnant and edward comes back...so you get the idea.
Dream chapter 1 . 7/15/2010
I love it!I think u r doing a great job!
Allebasii chapter 1 . 3/22/2010
awesome!
xx.Mrs.Jacob.Ephraim.Black.xx chapter 14 . 2/17/2010
O.M.F.G! You are absolutly brilliant! I'm so glad Edward came back ( although blatantly Jacob is so much cooler AND hotter lol) bella deserved to be happy after what jake did!

Anywayz a few typos but over than that fantastic :D
Shannon chapter 6 . 2/17/2010
:O dun dun dun! Lol that women was me btw :D

You're great! Loving it so far!
hi me here chapter 14 . 1/30/2010
Vampires can't cry
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