Reviews for Of Demons and Dancers
japanesegirl101 chapter 19 . 6/20
I really hope you will update this one day. This is a fantastic story. The bed chapter had me in a fit of laughter. I love the insanity Marik brings to the daily lives of Ryou and Tea. I can't wait to see what happens as more monsters keep showing and what the affects of defeating them has on Tea. Thank you for what you have written already. Looking forward to seeing an update if you ever get back to the story!
NewHorizons977 chapter 19 . 5/26
I am liking this story so much. why did you stop updating, it is so likable. Specially the character development, Tea changed from innocent, with little ability to act, to independant, kinda sassy girl. She forgave her friends but everything has its limits, she felt free to have her own secrets and life and still be with them. while they looked at her like a little bird to be protected. she was kicking asses, which is hilarious.
i also like that kind of strange air around her and Yami. unlike other fics. she is not all into him like crazy, which frustrates me, even if something happedned it would be more reasonable, he worries and ca not even explain himself and she standing her ground and letting him see how much she became steonger, not a cry baby. Oh god, i talk too much
anyway i hope you continue it soon. please
Tracy chapter 19 . 11/14/2015
Great story! Hope u update soon, keeping us in suspense really hurts lol
Aya El maghrabi chapter 19 . 11/10/2015
A GIANT! that was super funny and good to imagine sweet Tea in front of a giant. But she is very bold and smart I, I like it. I want to know the rest of her friends reactions when they know the whole story since the first attack. They sure noticed the scars and all.
it must be hard to be in a battle only you can face. we all have that but not with a giant. It reminds me of 'TROLL IN THE DUNGEONS'
I hope you update soon :)
Guest chapter 19 . 11/9/2015
You must absolutely finish this gem! Oh my gods tge hilarity of Marik's trolling and I just LOOOOVE how badass and independent Téa is right now. I'm going to re-read all chapters and review them. Also I thoroughly enjoyed Téa's and Ryou's beautiful relationship as buddies and best of roommates. This fan fiction is amazing! It's everything I want of Téa's badassery in fan fiction! And she's so funny! I love your version of Téa! So please please and a million times please keep writing this fan fiction.
Sapphire S. Bluchiha chapter 19 . 11/9/2015
This story is so weird but I can't find it in myself to not love it.
Despite the fact that Marik and Yami and somewhat out of character - Yami being an ass and Marik being weird - and not much making sense, I regret to tell you that I like this very much.
Téa being the hero in something is a very rare concept in Yu-Gi-Oh fics but you've managed to make it work... somehow...
Those Kaibas videoing seemingly everything and just their banter in general is quite funny.

I look forward to seeing where this goes.
zero25 chapter 19 . 10/4/2015
Yay! you updated! This was awesome! Others finally know what's going on with Tea! Can't wait for the next one! I wonder how Yami will deal with this? Also will Yugi play a hand in this with his new powers?
SpookedRabbits chapter 18 . 6/1/2015
I never read the original one you wrote, so I can't attest to the Sueness prior to this story. And I think it's awesome you had someone who was honest enough to point out such a fact - honest reviewers are hard to find, especially ones who will take the time to let you know in a not-entirely-soul-crushing way.

But allow me to be a sycophant for a moment, because I love this story. Like, really really love it.

Firstly, the plot idea you have going is fascinating. reminds me a lot of xxxHOLIC but it's really cool Tea pretty much has to do the fighting on her own. She has a sidekick in the form of the pale boy (very cool OC as well, you've done a good job with him) but other than that, she's a one woman defender. And that's amazing.

When Tea's characterisation is done well it makes me so happy, and in your story she really is blossoming into a self-reliant, confident woman. She still has setbacks and makes mistakes and that's even better. Her initial conflict about killing was great - it's depressingly common for people to write the average human as an instant killing machine, but Tea has remorse over her actions even though she knows it was for her own survival. You're taking her on a real journey and it's so compelling to read.

Okay, off track. But the plot is so interesting, and I'm so ready for Tea to be the saviour of humankind for once.

Your prose and dialogue is great. Very vivid imagery and you keep the voices of the characters so on point. They're also each sympathetic and relatable in their own way, with personality and motivation that comes through for each character. Yami and the Setos are great examples - they're making mistakes, being stupid and irrational, but you can still empathise with their feelings so it prevents a sense of...I suppose, one dimensional beta-villainy?

Also, Mokuba. So cute. Ryou, even more adorable. Duke, nice to see him get a bit of usefulness. There are things I love about every character. I think I'd be writing my own novella if I started on them all.

Yami Marik...I was going to actually write two reviews. Because chapter seventeen made me laugh so inappropriately. I received death glares from my partner because I was disturbing his Mad Men binge. I cried a little, but it was great. It really struck me as the kind of late night hijinks which are usually fuelled by alcohol and a total lack of sleep.

Your interpretation of Yami Marik just makes me so happy, it's probably my favourite of him so far! Just such a strange childish psychopathy!

I realise you haven't updated for several months, and I would understand if you've lost the fire for this story. I just wanted to let you know that you've been doing a spectacular job with this story and if you didn't feel proud before, you should now. You've got a real flair for writing, and if you're not continuing this I hope you're taking that spark into other ventures either way.

I'm pretty sure there was more I wanted to say, and I'll probably think of it later. But you've got an avid reader in me, and I'd love to see more!
varee chapter 18 . 3/7/2015
While scary at first now it seems just hilarious. I kind of miss the struggle, the fear, the discord between Tea and her friends. And Marik's personality. Right now he's just a marshmallow.
I'll be looking forward to another chapter.
Cheers,
Varee
varee chapter 17 . 3/6/2015
Hey, for the first time I understand how it feels to howl with laughter! I absolutely adore Marik. A little ray of sun on otherwise gray and scary story.
Honestly, would you consider finishing? Please?
varee chapter 5 . 3/6/2015
It was bad. Bad, bad and heavy, incredibly so.
I love you.
Anzu chapter 10 . 1/10/2015
I love this story! Though, I would like to see this happen: Tea goes out to face a monster, and for some reason Yami is walking in the area. He hears someone and walks toward the sound. He sees Tea fighting the monster with the chainsaw ( LOL). And he can see the monster and flips out! I think it would be awesome! PLease keeo writing!
M.M chapter 18 . 10/19/2014
Hi! It was funny ! And interesting chapter ! I like how you wrote not only about tea and Ryou but also about Yami,Yuugi,Seto's, and the Ishtars.!
Good work, and luck( college put everything on edge) and please keep it up !
Strop chapter 18 . 10/5/2014
Holy shit this is like the most hilarious thing I've read all week? And I mean like, last week, because it's Sunday now. So. Uh.

Loving Marik's characterization, and everyone's antics, and basically any interaction that goes on between Tea and Ryou because it's simultaneously the funniest and most goddamn adorable thing I have ever seen. I'm so mad. Oh my god. Why am I laughing at, "You only want me for my muffins." What the hell. Stop it.

Here's hoping for more Tea-beating-the-everloving-shit-out-of-things, and some sort of showdown between Marik and Bakura. I would pay good money to see both of those. Bonus points if chairs are involved.
zero25 chapter 18 . 10/2/2014
LMAO! OMG! Rolling on the floor, holding my stomach, LMAO! I can just imagine Tea using the chainsaw on Marik! LOL! LOL! LOL! Can't wait for the next update!
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