Reviews for Vanilla Salt
Epicnezzzer chapter 11 . 8/31/2016
Darling, there's such a thing as too fast in a plot. you've brought on too many developments, without rational time for the processing and comprehension of the events. You have been great so far, this story is very fun and interesting. Maybe next time set it in the past instead, as if they were in grade or middle school, because this whole perfect and rebel thing isn't too logical. also, you might want to integrate the volturi children more, because they just show up and leave. overall, great work, but make sure you plan your stories first, at least get a general idea in your head.
Guest chapter 8 . 12/29/2015
I know she is 17 but my god she is so childish! Like 12/13 childish! The way her brain works is just so immature! The poor child she is going to be bringing into this world
jterry453 chapter 12 . 10/5/2015
Uhh what?
frostedglaze chapter 12 . 9/30/2015
I loved this story. I was sent here by someone looking for this story, and I am glad I did. Though was that it for the sequel? Just one chapter?
bellawu chapter 12 . 11/5/2013
Love this story! I'm sad to see it end :( I wish you will write more. 10 years after maybe?
gatorgrl91 chapter 12 . 9/16/2013
Cute story
bluegirl27262 chapter 12 . 8/21/2013
well this was a great story...
lovexxlustxx chapter 3 . 7/29/2013
This fic has a very interesting twist! Love it.
I really enjoy the whole rebel-perfect war, it's very entertaining to read.
GoldenAffair chapter 1 . 5/4/2013
Loved the concept of this story, its completely unique and brilliant.. .. and the scenes you wrote were just too romantic and was sweet,yet just sooo dark and his possessiveness and protective nature even as a teenager and thoroughly enjoyed reading about a strong Bella who made him work for his story was fluffy, cute and sweet. I have read it over and over and over again, it was THAT smut was nice too, perfect for two adolescents in loveee. The ending was superb, had me squealing and the sequel chapter had me in splits:)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/4/2013
S.O.S. please! Someone help me! It ain't healthy, for me to feel this wa-Ay!
that's what ur story is makin me feel like!
Taylor chapter 12 . 6/20/2012
That wasn't a sequel. It was an epul
Edward's spouse chapter 12 . 5/2/2012
excellent story. just so you know your sequel is more like an epilogue. just in case anyone wants to write bad things, i just wanted you to know. sorry if it seems like an insult in any way.
Zee chapter 12 . 12/30/2011
I LOVED it. Best story on fanfiction!
ieatsugarforbreakfast chapter 12 . 11/30/2011
That was more epilogue than sequel. Are you going to write a legit sequel? I mean, I know it's almost two years since you last updated this, but maybe for your readers?
aubrey'isabellaC chapter 11 . 11/25/2011
I LOVED every minute of it ! I cried like a bitch at the end but I would sacrifice my salt water for those words (: anyway I dont want you tooo stop ! sequel ? Please ! This is by far my favorite story :D and what can I say ? Opposites attract 3
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