|Reviews for The Big Red Death|
| a chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
| Psycho-Wolf chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Interesting and has potential. You need to work on getting out of 3rd person though. It screws with the flow.
| LordFrieza chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Great story and great beginning. I am hoping to read more about it in later chapters.