Reviews for The Big Red Death
a chapter 1 . 6/1/2012
furry sue
Psycho-Wolf chapter 1 . 1/10/2010
Interesting and has potential. You need to work on getting out of 3rd person though. It screws with the flow.
Ron Jeremy Pony chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Great story and great beginning. I am hoping to read more about it in later chapters.