Reviews for Eternity
Candy3314 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011
O.O... Amazing... Simply amazing... :) You did good! *Thumbs up* I wish there was more flics like this, the dark possesive kind... But then again, all ur storys r like that right? LOL
Kristen chapter 1 . 2/12/2011
lol y would you make my dear darling axel crazy? XD
AllSheNeedsIsLove chapter 1 . 1/28/2010
Oh my goodness. Quite twisted, but it was good.
Katielorraine chapter 1 . 8/15/2009
wow!i absolutly love all of your stories and this was a VERY good one! i love all the blood and gore yea i know im weird
Zelex656 chapter 1 . 4/9/2009
I truely love this story. I love the way you wrote the death it was so wonderful. Thank you for writing I can't wait to read more of your stuff.

Yours truely

Zelex
Canvasgirl chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Whoa... now I get it O.O Holy crap... Axel... you coulda just tied him up or maybe... you know, kept him in a basement? Poor Roxas... T.T *sobs* But my God Taru, you've got some mad skills here. Your writing is so good, everything was great :D Though I'm scared of promising eternities now... o.O

I can't believe the amazing things that come from that mind of yours Roxy, I'm so jealous :3 *glomps* Keep up the greatness ;3
sydneybell24 chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
This was really scary, but really beautiful as well. Axel's a scary creeper. But I kinda like it. Bahaha. Great job!
Zeroinfinity chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Wow, that was amazing..and it really tugs on the heart. Poor Axel...and Roxas.
Arkaham chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
o_O very interesting...

and holding for a very dramatic ending. :D amazing!
Jayrin Paige chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Roxy! D: FF cut off my review, AGAIN. -seethes- So, anyway.. as I was saying in the last review that was so unawesomely cut off, I loved the descriptions, and poor Axel D: He just loves Roxas, if not.. in creepy, slightly scary ways
jay is on her phone3 chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
My Roxie! You make me sound like the sadistic One d:

Kidding, kidding. ;D you know I loffs you!
FinalFallenFantasy chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Ooh whoa... Axel, hate to say it, but you are just a little bit crazy there. It's really good; despite the shortness of the oneshot you can really get inside the character's head. Well done!
Spittfyre chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
O, how creepy! Kind of scary, I'm not really into dark things, but I liked how you wrote it from Axel's perspective!
mei lynn 64 chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
-crying- oh axel... why?

axel~O-O dunn ask me, she made me do it!

roxas~-dead-

me~-shoots axel in he foot- this has got to be the most phycotic thing i've ever read from you...o-O oh yes.

axel~-holding foot-

me~sadly, as my friend would say, i am killing apart of myself. -shoot axel in the other foot- i hope you got your writers block out! this was so sad and... for lack of a better word...

axel~INSAINE!

me~sh axel! well, that is what i was gunna say though. i like it though. roxas needs his revenge though.-runs out at the thought of a zombie roxas-
123456goodbye chapter 1 . 3/18/2009
new story Terra? i haven't talked to you in forever! ;A; kinda makes me sad but I'll get over it i got obsessed with Hetalia to side with Kingdom Hearts so it's all good. but anyway it's a very nice intro kinda misleads to what happens at the end. which is good or bad depending on how you want it. aw writer's block, i hate that my friends kinda pressure me to finish my fanfics that are still in my flash drive it, it doesn't really help. I'm sure you'll get out of your writer's block! it'll pass i promise!

-Twister Atma