Reviews for You Never Know
Coolio person chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
good idea. I love what i like about you. you should really continue!
mrc22 chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
First off lose the lines. They're tacky and distracting.

Secondly, don't put & instead of spelling out "and" it shows laziness.

Thirdly you didn't have to extend the o's in the word no, you could've just wrote "No..."

Also, you should revise it again, take out the extra exclamation points, and instead of writing something like "-laughs-" you should be able to describe her laughing, not doing so, again, shows laziness.


Chelseapanda chapter 1 . 4/6/2009
when tina found out her blind date was gary she still should've gone out on a date with him. it would be cut eto see her going out with gary and them to totally be in love and holly being grossed out! lol try that out for tina :D