Reviews for Ill Fate
random reader chapter 2 . 3/18
If you ever see this please keep going!
Jorge chapter 2 . 10/10/2014
No more?
the missing link chapter 2 . 5/11/2014
I freaking LOVE THIS STORY is there going to be another update?
Guest chapter 2 . 8/31/2013
i feel kind of bad 4 bb & rae, but this is the purfct way 2 get tem 2geter (evil smirk). anyway,loves it & would really appreciate it if ude update, so please update
Daniel chapter 2 . 5/22/2013
great story!
Ninja Misao chapter 2 . 3/3/2013
I love the talks between Raven and Beast boy _
Ninja Misao chapter 1 . 3/3/2013
Very nice! I love how you kept everyone in character heck it was like I was watching an episode of the show keep it up!
Goomba Fortress chapter 1 . 3/2/2013
Your technique is good, and from the get-go I'm able to jump right back into the Teen Titans universe, just like I had never left. The attention to detail is fantastic, and I have no problem immersing myself in this story.

But the first chapter is so long, I have a hard time focusing and remembering what is going on after a while. I would suggest breaking this one up into smaller portions to make it more accessible and easier to read. Less dwarfing, if that makes sense.

Overall, I can't really offer any other kind of criticism. I know that's what these wonderful boxes are for, but I'm coming up short. That's a good thing for you. Keep writing, it's something you are good at.
Sammi 007 chapter 2 . 2/6/2013
MORE!xxx
jokergirl4ever chapter 2 . 9/24/2012
I love this story! Can't wait to see how Raven Boy explain this to of the gang.
drunkensailour208 chapter 2 . 8/29/2012
great chapter! can not wait for another :)
Sergeant Daniel chapter 2 . 7/19/2012
This is a really really good story. Please update soon:D
Dead Reckoning chapter 2 . 6/22/2012
Oh, wow! This is a great story! I really really like the premise, and I like where this is going, too. But, again, break it up, honey. Other than a few typos in chapter two, that's about all I can say!

I can't wait to read more!

Sam
Snakeking888 chapter 2 . 6/16/2012
So have you given up on this story or what?

Please answer.
KaseiC chapter 2 . 10/4/2011
You have a special knack for dialogue. :) Can't wait for more!
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