|Reviews for Right Here Waiting|
| Twister.xp chapter 2 . 10/22
I LOVE how you worked BDSM into the story. As a part of the lifestyle, I REALLY love that.
Also, the story is GREAT! And I want to read more of your work.
P.S. No, you got the sub thing mostly right, save bits of the explanation. In the lifestyle, slaves and subs are different. subs (little 's', Doms, Tops and Masters have capitalized titles) have more of a say so, have hard limits as to what they are willing to do. We have Doms, and Master is more of a nickname or preference, for lack of better explanation. We have jobs, take care of things outside of the BDSM world. Slaves are committed to their Masters 100%, physically, financially, EVERYTHING. They usually don't work, and when they do, their Masters dictate how that income is spent (not all dynamics are that way, but usually a M/s is set up as such, and a GOOD Top/Master/Dom has the bottom/slave/subs best interest at heart, and aren't controlling asshats and non-consensually abusive) Slaves have much stricter limitations on what to eat, how to dress, act, and an entire list more.
The collaring is perfect, but is used for both subs and slaves, depending on the dynamic, in both hetero and homosexual relationships, and some poly dynamics, I've seen two or three subs/slaves collared by one person. I hope this info has helped at least somewhat.
But, you did very well with it, esp considering you aren't part of the lifestyle. Kudos!
| KiraK.chan chapter 2 . 10/3
I KNOW IT WAS ON PURPOSE BUT MAKING NARUTO SEEM TO DIE NO. THIS FIC WAS INCREDIBLE THOUGH LOVED ITTTTTTTT
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/3
all hail ye, yaoi queen!
| Guest chapter 1 . 9/3
That was beautiful...all hail CerealK as the new Emperor of Yaoi! Long Live Cereal!
No seriously, that was so crazy hot I can't believe I didn't read this before. Like dude-come on! I love it!
| Ashinia chapter 2 . 8/3
The ending...was absolutely perfect
| LoveCritic chapter 2 . 5/5
Are you trying to kill me! I was dying thinking that Naruto had died. It was such a great story love it so much.
| Taku chaan chapter 2 . 4/6
OMG this fiction killed me ! Each lemon times were HOT AS HELL (specially the first time) I almost died in my blood because of sexy-Sasuke inflaming Naruto everytime he could, and that f*ckin-sexy-wild-Naruto so masculine and bestial in bed! What's wrong with them they were absolutely STEAMY! Sasuke almost aroused me too when he was arousing Naruto at the ''first making love'' moment! btw, this whole moment was a treat !
AND THE DIRTY TALKING THEY USE ALL ALONG THE STORY IS THE BEST THING EVER !
My nosebleed couldn't stop!
This little fiction was so funny, and dramatic, and then romantic ...! (with the plane accident I thought it wasn't a romance/humour anymore and that I was reading drama! Don't play with my heart! lol)
And I usually don't really like when there is an age difference but you did so well with this plot that I just want to kneel !
Thank you for this.
ps : the Haku and Zabuza couple is perfect ! XD
| Rikako chapter 2 . 2/24
Enjoyed it deeply, made me laugh so hard, especially when I thought it had been Naruto who died...but it had been Sai's grandma...
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/3
You fucker I love you so much HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME CRY ME FUCKING EYES OUT YOUR SO AMAZING
| WolfieLiz chapter 2 . 12/15/2014
Amazing story! I was crying by the end!
Thank you for your work!
| J4sm1n4 chapter 2 . 12/9/2014
Awesome I love this!
| godess bubbles chapter 2 . 12/1/2014
If they had died I would have cried my eyes out...I loved it!
| Butterfly1993 chapter 2 . 10/30/2014
Epic ! AMAZING ! FANTASTIC loved it xD xD
| 00Misty chapter 2 . 6/13/2014
wow, that was a roller-coaster, but perfectly portrayed. Wonderful job.
Thank you for the fic.
| Amai Aka-chan chapter 2 . 6/3/2014
Why? Why did you do that to me? I hate you so much. I'm crying. I thought Naruto died. I was so scared. You suck. But I love you. That was so good, all of it. God.