|Reviews for Coercion|
| deidara-chan's lover214 chapter 9 . 4/4/2013
This was interesting! Write more please!
| LM22102 chapter 9 . 2/21/2012
Ah, just as it was about to get good.
| fergie20 chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
This is a very interesting story! It is very well written and has a solid plot. Hope you will eventually update!
| inuyasha116 chapter 1 . 3/6/2011
i only read the first chapter but i love it. Usually hinata is resistance against working with or for orochomaru but here its the opposite. it creative, different, and interesting. It may not be romance but its a deep twisted passion between a master and servant. Something in many stories, manga, or fanfic that they don't have. The ones who share that loyalty have a bit of insanity with them. I am writing my own version though maybe hinata stays in character more(shyness, blushing, crush on naruto, etc) though a softer passion of serving orochimaru.
| inuyasha116 chapter 9 . 2/9/2011
XD. It is very good so far. Yes Hinata is/was a bit out of character but that is ok as long as you show her changing out of character and within reason. I do hope you continue...maybe you should make it rated M;) XD or not. I hope Sasuke and Hinata's relationship can make it to tolerable, or close acquaintance, maybe a thoughtful word or two.
| Widad chapter 9 . 11/29/2010
That was delicious and I want more. Care to sate my new fancy?
| SatiricFable chapter 9 . 6/16/2010
Probably one of the most realistic versions of Hinata "joining" Orochimaru I've read. It's really well written, and I like the emotion you put into it.
Really good job, I hope you choose to update soon!
| FaNg-noT-fnIcK chapter 9 . 3/1/2010
This is really good, update soon!
| dumdeedum chapter 4 . 10/14/2009
Finally, Hinata meets Orochimaru, and survives!
Anyway, good job in keeping everyone in character.
| dumdeedum chapter 2 . 10/14/2009
I love the dark nature of this story. I really like the crack pairing of Kabuto-Hinata, but it's Hinata's descent into darkness that really caught my attention.
Great job so far!
| dumdeedum chapter 9 . 8/21/2009
I think you have a great story going on here. Hinata is believable as a captive follower of Orochimaru via Kabuto. You've kept everyone in character and the pacing is just right, not rushed or dragging.
IT's been a few months since this was updated, and I hope you'd write another chapter soon!
| field innocence chapter 9 . 5/9/2009
Awesome! Once again you did a perfect job. It's about time she kick some butt and kill. But it was kinda gross about her cutting the flesh of dead body, well at least they were dead. I think Orochimaru should be afraid and Kabuto should be thankful that he found her. Oh I can't wait for the next chapter _
Update soon, I'll be waiting.
| Jomin chapter 9 . 5/8/2009
Wow you take your time to write this, Please keep on this story, Is sad when writers don't finish their stories, and this one is good, you have a faithful reader in me, see ya!
| Adelaide 'Adell' Peirce chapter 9 . 5/8/2009
An update... I'm so happy TT And this is one of the best ones yet. I love you! -hugs author-
| netbreaker0 chapter 9 . 5/8/2009
Well Hinata it seems has turned some of her stalkerness that she had for Naruto toward Orochimaru now.