Reviews for Fated?
JustFabulous chapter 1 . 3/25/2014
I love it! I like how Hinata is portrayed in this fic: More outgoing. And Sasuke wants the only thing that is unattainable to him...gosh, he's special sometimes. Haha, anyway, I really enjoyed this and would love it if you made a sequel or such! :D
Anonymouse chapter 1 . 6/28/2011
Well just a few things to point out.

Other than Sasuke being a total self-centered, egotistical bastard, I thought that it was quite nice. I don't see any pairings even coming up, especially since Itachi only 'claims' to be infatuated with her because of her beauty. I wished you could've dwelled deeper into his feelings to get a picture of what you'd want to portray.

Another this is if both families were so traditional - I could tell. Marrying into specific families is a good example - then why'd they wear a tux? I can't picture them both in black suits, sitting on their legs on a traditional home with Hinata dressed in a kimono. They should have been in yukatas or something. Just sayin'.

And what about Hinata's disposition? Was she sad because of Hanabi's death? Or was she frustrated because of the arranged marriage?

Lol. But I love the Itachi-Sasuke interaction (brotherly only of incest). Haha. Nice story. Needs some work with grammar and theme though.
Suraya Bakboord chapter 1 . 2/24/2011
crimsonkira chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
LOL the end was really funny. if i hadnt seen the authors note that said one shot i wud hav thought it was a beginning to a multi-chapter story. either way it was great! HAH SUCKED IN UCHIHAS, HINATA CALLED U BOTHER NARCISSISTS ;P
OxVanillaPeachesxO chapter 1 . 2/6/2010
"Disgusting; who really finds such misshapen lumps of fat attrative?"

MAJOR LMFAO MOMENT! That had me cracking up until the end of the story, and I'm STILL laughing. xD Imma say this to my mom, and see how she reacts...if I don't log on for awhile, it most likely means coughIMDEADcough. Anywho, good story, and it sounds JUST like Sasuke, or should I say, Chicken-Butt Haircut boy.

With mass praise and laughter,

~Peachuz B'D
AFAN chapter 1 . 12/23/2009
that was great please do another
Moto Moon chapter 1 . 12/21/2009
WOOH! Go Hinata! haha.

I liked that... It was fun to read, made me smile. Especially during Itachi and Sasuke's spat over hinata... Then, well I'm sure I don't need to explain what happened, huh?
Electrified by Evil chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
inuyasha116 chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
i liked it i don't think it sucked at all if you post another one send it to me please
sasuhinaneji chapter 1 . 4/29/2009
I LOVE IT.'nuff I just have to say !I love the little out burst Hinata gave to the Uchiha also Sasuke and Itachi's conversation about their pretty-ness.I was also enjoying this because they were fighting over Hinata,of course!Well,I shall now be reading more of your stories now!

Apple Of The Sand chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
Ha! In Sasuke's face! (and Itachi's, but that's beside the point) I love any fanfiction that puts Sasuke's ego in the gutter! Hm. That can be meant in more ways than one. :D I actually thought... wished Itachi was gonna win this round. Oh well, it was worth it to see Sasuke get his butt handed to him - metaphorically of course.
CutieSOS chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
i loved this it was realy good
Darth-Taisha chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
Cute, i hope she ends up with Itachi...please make it so.
EverythingToMe chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
ha ha ha i loved the ending...the hinata you portrayed caught me of gaurd compleatly...
nuriiko chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
love the story. thou there's a bit of spelling mistakes but you're forgiven for that :) I wonder if there's any continuation. But it is still nice as a one shot.
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