I'm speechless , wow i loved every word of it and i loved your idea of getting him to remember his past

beautifully written

This is still my favorite post-eclipse story I've read. It's so in character and just absolutely brilliant. I've read it multiple times. LOVE IT.

I loved this story...so very sad to see it go. I had something interrupt me but I was glad I was able to come back and finish. Looking forward to more... :)

Wonderful chapter! Perfect, wonderful, amazing! I just loved it :)

I love Bella's thoughts in the journal! What a perfect thing for Bella to do for Edward - I loved it :)

What you were going to do would've been awesome, but i still LOVED it. It was soo sweet, i'm not gonna lie, i cried. Thanks!:)

I absolutely love & adore how passionate that was, all of it! Thank you:)

Did Carlisle do the morphine?
Completely loving, intimate, wonderful chapter. Can't say enough!
Hope you had a wonderful Thanksgiving :)

Happy that everything turned out good with Charlie, Billy, and especially Jake. He was a huge mountain! He really seems to understand and that should make things easier for Bella...

You have left me speechless...
How many ways can someone say wonderful, amazing, fantastic and hope that it means what you are saying? It does, it really does!

No need to be nervous...Loved the chapter. No one wants the same thing over and over again. Love the little twists. Jake needed to imprint and have a consuming love to understand where Bella and Edward were coming from. He could never totally understand unless he experienced it himself not just through the 'eyes' of his brothers. They didn't understand like he did.
I love their first night together - and I love that they are still going to Esme's Island. They were just being cautious. I think this part is wiser...

Loved the biology class scene :) How Edward got her there was genius! She's the one who took it a step further. Great job!
She found out that Edward read the notebook! Emotions so real :) I love all of Edward's fantasies as well! Maybe he'll open up on the honeymoon!
Just completely enthralled in this story...!

I love when he found her notebook of the list and mimicked her handwriting and added his own fantasy - PRICELESS!

Hmmm... Edward's using the "dare" to get his own way. After Emmett sees the Tattoo, he is so turned on, when Bella tries to remind him of the dare he says, "screw the dare".
Then, when he wants to buy the car for Bella he reminds her of the dare and says that he never got to punish her. There is a little manipulation going on here...