|Reviews for Control|
| Meluivan's Muse chapter 8 . 12/2/2009
I was just taking a 5min break (between studying for a huge exam tomorrow and sickness and general crazyness) and checked your profile and voila! I find this pretty amazing thing.
Suffice to say, I loved it! Very much!
I liked the little flashbacks and your take into Chris' thoughts and loss of control.
I loved that Chris admited that he never hated Leo, he just hates that he can't hate him... or something like that, my mind is fuzzy right now. Lovely and painful.
Honey, sorry for the short rr, but I have to keep going.
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful piece. :D :D :D
| Meluivan's Muse chapter 7 . 10/11/2009
Oh I just read your answers while I was reading this chapter. I liked the chapter, it was very fun, and it was a blast to the past. I never put my barbie in the toaster, but once, in one of my friend's eight birthday, we threw Ken out of the second floor window (of a building). Poor Ken lost both legs, and maybe an arm if I remember correctly (that was about 15 years ago).
So, I had a good laugh at Grace, Melinda (...) and Connor (...)'s expense. Lol.
Poor Penny and Patty... caring for six kids at the same time is not a easy deal. Quite hard, actually.
The only thing I didn't like about the chapter was the lack of Chris and Wyatt. Sure, they were mentioned, but they didn't appear. *Sobs*
The rest was lovely... even Connor and Grace. And Melinda, a little bit. Not much. I'm not sold yet. It will be a very hard task, I tell you. Lol. But not impossible. So there is hope for you (me?) yet. But only with you, not in general.
Did you check my private message? It's long and very babbling.
Pish posh, take the free night (I'm such a bad influence). Do write some more. A Chris shot would be lovely. I could even give you some ideas. Hmm. I didn't see the episode about Wyatt and his teddy bear. But I know of it. He mentioned that baby Chris swallowed a marble.
Or a truly bonding moment between parents and son. After the tribunal or the demon reality show. Dunno.
Or the aftermath of It's a bad, bad world. Sure, many of this ideas has been done, but I'm sure you can make it unique if you want to give it a try.
| Meluivan's Muse chapter 4 . 10/11/2009
Wow, another powerful shot. I loved it. You portrayed Prue in a great way. How tough she is. How she postponed the breaking point. How she believes is undignified to cry or sob. Wow. Just wow. I really felt the pain, her heartbreak for Andy's death. Her guilt, regrets and recriminations. Very well done :)
| Meluivan's Muse chapter 3 . 10/11/2009
Ohh I loved this one. I haven't read the others yet, I think I'll probably read one more and the rest take it slow. I love how you portrayed Leo here. About his sureness of his decision, but in the other hand, the huge, huge change in his life. His fears about not been useful, about not being able to heal Piper or the boys, of not being able to sense them. It was so real and heartwrenching at the same time.
I liked Piper a lot too, specially when she couldn't help but laugh at his neurosis and need for control. The boys... lovable as always. I really like how you portray my little darlings.
I checked the titles for the other chapters, and Chris isn't in it. Oh *tears*
Oh well. You did an amazing job in this one ;)
| GravityMuse chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
I cannot believe this has been up since March, and I haven't seen it until just now! And there are SEVEN! I am torn between wanting to devour them all at once, or be patient and save them.
Anyway, the Paige one is wonderful. I love that you chose this moment, and I love that you focused on Leo/Paige. Oh, and this: "They would do what Patty and Sam hadn’t, because Patty and Sam hadn’t cared enough to try." This breaks my heart.
Terrific idea for this, and I cannot wait to read more!
| atlan2007 chapter 7 . 5/22/2009
Funny chapter, nice job!
| atlan2007 chapter 6 . 5/22/2009
Nice chapter, poor crazy Cole.
| XsunflowerX chapter 7 . 5/21/2009
hahahahahah this last chapter was brilliant. I love it!
| atlan2007 chapter 5 . 4/18/2009
Nice work, poor Piper!
| XsunflowerX chapter 4 . 4/3/2009
Wow. If I could favourite a chapter, this would be favourited. For sure. Very well done on Prue. Witch Trials is another favourite of mine, and you did a good job in portraing Prue's emotions. And typical Phoebe being careless... as always. You captured the two (especially Prue) perfectly.
Oh and this line? Because if she makes no sound, then there is no evidence of the loss of control...
| atlan2007 chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
That was very nicely done. Good characterization and there is nothing wrong with no angst!
| XsunflowerX chapter 3 . 3/29/2009
Hahahahah! You ramble! That's funny.
No, this one was just as great as the other two. Piper just makes it funny because I can so see her laughing in the midst of Leo's ramblings. It was a well thought out, well written chapter :)
| anetteo chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
Such good chapters! Lots of feel to them, and at the same time you write the caracters fantastic. I hope you'll write one for Penny and Patty, as well as the sisters. Good job!
| XsunflowerX chapter 2 . 3/22/2009
Oh wow. Okay so Long Live The Queen is my favouritest episode ever, so yay for that! *gives you points and then shoots you* Nah just kidding! You did really well on this chapter. Great job. I love fics/oneshots from this episode. I love it. I really do believe everything that you wrote and that it was really such a hard decision for her to make. Well done.
| XsunflowerX chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
Well this is something different. I quite enjoyed it. Truth be told, I was going to over look it... but something stopped me and made me click on the link and I'm glad I did. I can't wait for the others. Will you be doing Prue as well?