Reviews for Never Noticed
Nafsi-chan chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Poor Hinata... :'{
MistressWinowyll chapter 1 . 9/1/2009
To say that there should be more to this then what you wrote is self explanatory. This has so much potential! Reall, you should put this as an intro to something else. I really liked it...but, it just feels so empty at the end.

Your Mistress.
yoyshaia-chan chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
AW! Makes me wanna give Hinata a massive hug!

Nice use of structure there.

Just one thing, try to find other words to use instead of 'yet'. In a longer fic, it wouldn't matter, but in a fic that short it gets noticed. It's not a big deal though

I really like it.