|Reviews for Remember|
| Sheelf21 chapter 53 . 6/1
Thanks for another wonderful story, as always, better than the original, and with much more sense about Harry and Ginny, since in the books of JK, after the experience in the secret chamber, Harry ignores Ginny, and does not ask her or even how she is, something that does not fit his character. Even if it had been through letters, until she had overcome her shyness and was able by that time to talk to him in person, they would normally have been in touch. And if so, their relationship would have occurred before and more naturally than as it appears in the original books. In addition, to include Narcissa Malfoy with such an important role, is, very original, and very interesting, because neither is it that it was hardly spoken of in the books, except in a couple of occasions.
Once again: thanks for writing and sharing it.
| edhuffyahoo.co chapter 10 . 5/16
"sunset breakfast"? PROOFREAD!
Also watch gender of pronouns!
| Jim Red Hawk chapter 50 . 3/11
I was surprised by you using the name 'James Willian' as that happens to be my name. I was named for my grandfather's. However, both names are very common on both sides of my family. I even share 'William' with a cousin who was part Creek Indian. He was a War Chief against Andrew Jackson in 1814. Ain't history exciting?
| Guest chapter 52 . 3/9
you dlmao at hermione now having a teacher tudent relationshp. I mesn she is so prim and proper (not a bad thing) and that's uch a traditionally, well, non prim thing, it's quite funnny
| FreelanceBum chapter 15 . 2/23
It bothers me how many times Harry says he loves Ginny in defense of how he would never hurt her directly after the chamber. Molly was quite correct in stating he didn't even know her, and love doesn't make sense in that context
| peggie63 chapter 53 . 2/20
Loved this one so much I read it twice. Many thanks!
| TheWateringWizard chapter 13 . 2/5
That makeshift duel against Tonks, Charlie and Bill annoys me more than anything else. He is so much more powerful than before, can do wandless magic like it's nothing, destroys dementors alongside Ginny with his superpowerful patrons. And then you want me to believe that Lucius and Bella can defeat him? Sorry but it's just dumb. And I don't like it. I don't like to think that he can be defeated by this two. Bella is good but Lucius is a wimp. You could've thought of anything different for Harry to get kidnapped. Something like more people ganging up on him or a traitor taking him by surprise. I still love your story, I just skip end of chapter 20 to end of chapter 22 and pretend that nothing ever happened
| dragonfox123 chapter 1 . 1/19
Awesome chapter and plot and amazing idea
| TheWateringWizard chapter 30 . 1/16
That's one thing that has me wondering. When "Another" Horcrux was destroyed, was it the Horcrux in Harry or did you invent another Horcrux for the story? I always wondered if it was the Horcrux in Harry that caused the connection and if it was the Horcrux that gave him the Parseltongue "powers"
| TheWateringWizard chapter 29 . 1/16
You always use real locations or historical names and I love it! It makes the whole story so much more realistic
| TheWateringWizard chapter 28 . 1/16
What?! What is the other Horcrux? Your story is so amazing, I can't stop reading. I wanted to read something else but I can't stop. At the end of every chapter, I feel the need to read the next
| TheWateringWizard chapter 27 . 1/16
I knew it! Ron was soabsent from the story and Charlie a lot more present. It had to end like this
| TheWateringWizard chapter 22 . 1/16
I know that things ended ok, he's safe and he can still have children but please in the future, don't try to make us believe that Malfoy and Bellatrix are all that's needed to down Harry. You can't do this and tell us before that Harry's magic was released from the binding it was under.
One a more positive note, the last couple of chapters were amazing! I was so nervous and on the edge while reading them. I skipped through bits of this chapter to know when Harry would escape and be safe. So much stress
| TheWateringWizard chapter 20 . 1/16
Okay, I know it's the plot but Harry falling to Lucius and Bellatrix like that? He's supposed to be a lot more powerful than before so it feels a little unbelievable
| TheWateringWizard chapter 16 . 1/16
I think Mrs Weasley's comments on Ginny's love life are pretty out of place considering all they did