|Reviews for Free My Heart|
| Guest chapter 10 . 2/5
to answer your question about "hot" yoga is that you sweat a lot but becoming skinnier is all about calorie in take, getting enough to make your metabolism fast and moving enough to burn all of those calories, but yoga can help with flexibility peace of mind and muscle control
| 0.0' Kahli hime chapter 8 . 2/1
This story is so great! But really, I was hoping to read this full lemon! Oh God, why is this site so annoying about posting rules and MA fanfiction?
Anyway, I am having so much fun reading this!
Thanks for sharing :)
| Stefxtastic chapter 11 . 9/27/2013
This story had me on the edge of my seat the whole time I read it. I really enjoyed it even if it was AU.
| Nova.81 chapter 11 . 9/8/2013
It seems silly to review a story that was completed ages ago but I just can't leave such brilliant work unappreciated!
I love your writing style, every chapter, every sentence is captivating and enchanting. You really have a way with writing a story!
I can't wait to read more of your work. Beginning with the sequel to this. :-)
| Princess Geta chapter 7 . 7/30/2013
Its probably wrong that I enjoyed this chapter as much as I did, isn't it? I couldn't help it! the violence was great (Yeah, definitely twisted) but it was more than that, the danger! the subtly! the predator like way in which Vegeta assessed this guy before, you know, tearing him limb from limb and stuff XD
Oooh I loved it.
| Princess Geta chapter 6 . 7/30/2013
Funny side story for you (Not funny haha more like...not really funny in the least) I'm relaxing in my room reading on this story on my phone and my mom decides its time to call me.
Cool, we speak on the phone a few minutes and then she decides she needs to talk to my dad too. Sitting in my room WAITING to continue reading your story apparently wasn't working out for me, because after a few minutes of impatient sitting, I got up and retrieved my laptop from underneath my bed to continue from where I left off.
The end. I know, not funny at all, right? but a compliment in there, hopefully ;)
| Princess Geta chapter 5 . 7/30/2013
That was a very cuddly chapter...right up until the end lol on to the next chapter!
| Princess Geta chapter 4 . 7/30/2013
Another fantastic chapter! The stakes are getting higher and the fact that you can kind of see where it's going doesn't take away from this what-so-friggin-ever. I love it. There's something so timeless and memorable about your style of writing and the wild adventures you take these two particular characters on Everytime you decide to try it just one more time. Thank you so much!
| Princess Geta chapter 3 . 7/30/2013
Ha! I love small moments of something so basic, necessary and awkward! I totally forgot they would need a bathroom x) great chapter!
| Princess Geta chapter 2 . 7/30/2013
The beginning is always my favorite, the arguments, the snide remarks, the tension. Love it!
| Princess Geta chapter 1 . 7/30/2013
I'm so glad you decided to write another Dbz story. Its funny, I can likely read all of your fanfiction - seeing as we seem to like all the same tv - but all the Dbz: vegeta/bulma ones of yours hold a special place in my heart. Great beginning, can't wait to read the rest
| SCeles chapter 1 . 2/17/2013
This is my favorite from you and is beautifully portrayed.
| Lady Ank chapter 11 . 1/19/2013
So when is the next part coming?
| Guest chapter 10 . 1/6/2013
This part reads like an awesome video game
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/5/2013
" Vegeta is turning out to be absolutely loquacious."
Oh my god, ew. I read that in Frieza's voice for some reason, and I'm not sure if it was because of all the tension in the previous chapter or what, but it disturbed the crap out of me