Reviews for Dreaming Of You
DarkAngel21 chapter 1 . 7/25/2010
Awww so sweet!

Kisshu:(gag) gross!

Angel:DAMARE BAKA! (slaps Kisshu)


Angel:You got what you deserved.

Kisshu:You know for an angel you seem a lot more like a devil.
True Colours chapter 1 . 9/14/2009
This was extremely kawaii, though I cna't help wishing it was all in real life...the dream sequences were so cute, especially the first one where she remembers his smile just before he dies. I think that, to make there be more point in having it as a dream and not actual events, Lettuce's dreams should have been interspersed with longer, parallel sections of Pai's awake POV. SO she's dreaming about their conversation, adn then he's remembering it, holding her and thinking about how he'll never lose her again, or some such fluff.

Also the final dream where she fell over was a bit of a random way to end it (?)
KaleidoscopeKreation chapter 1 . 7/17/2009
aw. flufftastic!
Safaia Bara chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
Aw! That was so kawaii! Simply adorable! Great job!

Briar Ariadne chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Aww, how cute! This was really good! It was a nice idea. :D
Tomahawk 3.0 chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
now this was cute. great job, and awesome work that Saba did, beta reading this! :)
Saba's Reflection chapter 1 . 3/20/2009
Kawaii! I think I felt something in the last sentence. _