|Reviews for Storks and Wolves|
| Jane chapter 23 . 2/20
I'm hoping Embry imprints on Leah once the baby comes. Maybe the imprint was blocked earlier because of the pregnancy. Hope so, because they both deserve to be happy.
| Jane chapter 15 . 2/20
Sorry, you used the word "you're" (a contraction of "you are") too many times in that chapter ( " you're wolves... you're wounds... you're life") where you should have used "your" for me not to mention it. You are a really good storyteller, and I am really enjoying the story, and I plan to read the sequel, but it is very disconcerting to read such basic misuse of words , so I hope you can get a handle on this. Please don't be put off by my criticism, because I mean it to be constructive.
| aurora lopez101 chapter 25 . 11/19/2013
Honestly, this story I love so much this is my 4th time reading it. I love the sequel and I just love the whole story :) thanks so much for being Fantastic :D
| AfricanQueen17x chapter 2 . 9/28/2013
nice so far
| twifantasyfan chapter 35 . 1/2/2013
I read this story through last night and found it interesting. Not a pairing I usually read, but still a good story.
My only real issue (and I blame this on always getting straight A's in my English/writing classes) was the difficulty you seemed to have using homophones. I do understand that "there/they're/their" and "where/were/we're" can be confusing for many people to tell apart and aren't things that a spell-check program would easily pick up. I know that there are some good websites out there that can offer tips on how to decide which of those words would be the right one to use in each situation. A skilled beta reader can also help to give an objective second pair of eyes (as many of us struggle to catch mistakes in our own writing, but can easily see them in others' work).
Ex-teacher stepping off the soapbox now. It was, as I said, an enjoyable story to read. You're a good creative writer, and the technical improvements would only make you even better.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 3 . 5/18/2012
Damn, Harry would have loved to see his first grandchild.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 2 . 5/18/2012
I'm in love.
| HalcyonSeasons chapter 1 . 5/18/2012
Oh. My. GOSH. This is great. Also, I love how you write Leah. It's like you're her best friend, or you know her yourself. That's good for writers to do! Love it.
| SundaySolis chapter 34 . 12/30/2011
| Musings of a Reader chapter 35 . 11/14/2011
supernannies? love that one.
| ebdarcy.qt4good chapter 2 . 8/7/2011
Great story! I've read it before, but it was just as entertaining to re-read it this time around :)
| GothArtiste101 chapter 32 . 6/28/2011
So what you're saying about Tony is that he's like Embry and Seth had a kid :P cuz, that's kinda what I got from that
| AllieMalfoy143 chapter 32 . 6/18/2011
Omg I cried reading this! It's just so sad
| ABarbieStory chapter 6 . 6/1/2011
great story so far!
| JaceDamian23 chapter 14 . 3/4/2011
I love your story plot. I also love how the unimprinted wolves want to protect Leah. Its cute.
Though I don't like how you don't put stars or a line to separate things. Like point of views. One second its one topic, the next all of a sudden its something else. Sometimes its Leahs point of view and then all of a sudden its Embrys or someone. I am not trying to be mean because as I stated already I love your story..but it just doesn't look right. It would look better with one point of view for each chapter and also if you placed a line or stars when you go from one topic to a TOTALLY different one right after. It just looks bad. And this is not a flame so please don't take it as one. I'm only being honest and as nice as I can.
Believe me I don't flame people and if I didn't like your story I'd not be reading it but I am because I love it.