|Reviews for Storks and Wolves|
| Lok2685 chapter 12 . 1/10/2010
Really impressive work...that plot you had for Embry's novel is a really good on; i'm serious i don't know where you got it from that would be incredible to hear
| Team Blackwater chapter 33 . 12/29/2009
please dont make seth gay. it will ruin all my pervert fantasies with him.
| Team Blackwater chapter 22 . 12/28/2009
why do you keep changing the pov so much. its annoying. makes me want to stop reading... okay not really, but still. too much!
| Team Blackwater chapter 9 . 12/28/2009
Honestly, I love blackwater(jacob/leah), but I also like Callwater(embry/leah), so I dont mind the pairing. Im team Leah, so Im good with everyone who makes her happy as long as it's not Sam, who I hate. Jared whose a Sam's bitch and Edward the mind raper lol. Your story is great I just wish it was Embry child.
| UnbelievinglyRandom chapter 34 . 11/27/2009
I loved it. Your story was awesome. i had never read a leah/embry paring i usually only read jacob/nessie. But now i am in love with the paring, they sound so cute! Great Job :D
| Mila-Renae chapter 35 . 11/23/2009
IT took me forever, but I finally finished it. I didn't even like Old Quil, but you wrote his final scene so well I bawled. It was beautiful. Thanks for the great story!
| tdfireproof chapter 34 . 11/19/2009
well thank you for writing this, it has inspired me to keep writing...
I found the whole half and whole wolfs interesting
it's like oreos everyone though Oreos were the best until they found out there were double stuffed oreos!
yeah I'm crazy
| tdfireproof chapter 33 . 11/19/2009
by the way
you've been spelling Exercise wrong for a very long time...
Exorcise is to drive a demon out of someone
exercise is to work out...
I know you could make the argument that you're driving out the demons of fat or something
| tdfireproof chapter 18 . 11/17/2009
I distinctly remember at the end of the last chapter you writing "they locked the door so nothing could happen" or something like that...
and I thought 'great so Seth isn't going to walk in on them having sex like he does in every fanfiction' wait what, how did it magically get unlocked... I assume they weren't like doing the "horizontal dance" all around the house
| tdfireproof chapter 15 . 11/17/2009
Sam is right it does take 2 for the horizontal half step known as sex...
and secondly she wouldn't get STRONGER as she became pregnant she'd become weaker since she's not phasing as much... it's just natural...
now lets do some mathmatics...
lets say a strong man... a large man can kick a fifty pound sack of potatos across the room... to do this he'd need a running start... a large running start but he could manage... but this sack of potato's isn't fifty pounds, now even accounting for werewolf strength i don't think it's possible for them to kick something more then say one hundred and fifty pounds across the room, and that's a Male who naturally have a stronger muscle mass than female but not saying their aren't strong females, lets say leah is as strong as the guys... so she could MAYBE kick a body that was 150 lbs across a room, MAYBE well lets look at sam, he is the largest of all the wolves right? Jacob is barely smaller then him. they are well over six feet tall, I estimate from 6'4 to 6'8 and they are all muscled. if they are well muscled at 6'4 to 6'8 there is no plausible way they weigh less than two hundred pounds. It is much more likely that the smallest, lightest pack member besides Leah herself is over two hundred pounds.
Leah hell I'm not guessing what she weighs... Now it's logical to believe Sam being the biggest of all the Pack would be the tallest, and have the most broad shoulders, and be the most muscled, thus making him weigh the most, because of this I think he weighs at lightest 275lbs. so it's impossible for her to kick him across the room
(oh don't get me started on throwing a fridge, as you can see I rant a bit)
and she should knee him in the balls for saying he never loved her... that was the harsh lie...
lol no more rants
| Persephone Crying chapter 3 . 10/27/2009
all the vampires would have realised leah was pregnant as soon as she walked into the house, because she would have had a second, much faster heartbeat.
especially if carlisle recons that her wolf genes would possibly give a false possitive, there can be no faking a heartbeat in a vampires presense!
| Davii-Hime chapter 35 . 10/21/2009
Yeah, I think you can tell how awesome that means I think you are xD
| angelzawright89 chapter 34 . 10/11/2009
OMG that was a great story. so good i read it in a day. you have two of the most original and creative stories (the brother i never knew) i have read for twilight and i cant wait to read your others. Please please please do sequal (my vote is for seth and tony with a little sarah and chris too)
| TangibleDarkness chapter 34 . 9/28/2009
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG I LOVED IT! It took me a while to read but it was amazing! Wow, Chris imprinted on Sarah? Aw. Wonderful story, Old Quill is happy, Leah got her man, and it was just...Amazing! Fabulous! Sequel please!
| ravenwhitlock33 chapter 34 . 9/15/2009
I just found this story a couple of days ago and have read all 34 chapters. Entirely in love with the ideal of Leah being a mother - Embry and Leah good match - new wolves from Makah great - Lots of angles, hopes, despairs, and dreams to be fulfilled so why not continue.
My only request PLEASE DO NOT LEAH OR EMBRY IMPRINT. It would be entirely to awful for Sarah.
Thanks and please continue...