|Reviews for Prelude|
| Adir Al-Assad chapter 1 . 4/27/2009
Pervy!Vince creeped me right the hell out. My, what a diabolical character you've made of him here. As for JBL, slightly-squicked and with conscience *works* for him here, and you've portrayed him well as such.
I was squicked and impressed at the same time. Great work.
| XxShawns Guardian AngelxX chapter 1 . 4/7/2009
O.O This is...wow. You got Vince's onscreen psycho character down to a science. Wow. *shudders* And poor John...I love the contact. It works. for some reason it just...works. Wow. You're really good at the angst. This is a disturbing topic but I remember when this happened. Well...when JBL attacked Hornswaggle anyway. So great job again!
| WittleWabbit chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
I love your writing but PLEASE, please just do something for me...keep Hornswoggle out of slash?
Oddly enough I'm very adaptable when it comes to pairings; I love your creepy Vince/JBL, but - and I have nothing against dwarfs - Hornswoggle thrown in there just doesn't seem to work XD
Plus how about some JBL/Shawn with JBL as the evil dom? :P
I don't think Shawn makes a very good topper