Reviews for What if? The Purgatory of Lily
salsas100 chapter 11 . 10/20
That was interesting. So many forks in the road. Moments of reflexion.
Thanks for posting
Rook of Eight chapter 1 . 5/30
This is a fantastic idea for a story!

This chapter was amazing.
Anonymous chapter 11 . 1/11
You should continue the "Penance, The Purgatory of James" idea - it's very interesting.
Good Idea chapter 11 . 8/26/2015
Penance, The Purgatory of James is the one I would have most liked to read. He is just so CLUELESS!
Good Idea chapter 6 . 8/25/2015
Your Mary is an evil GENIUS! She made me laugh! I loved her!
teedub chapter 10 . 8/16/2015
I just stumbled upon this story and I was riveted. Completely enthralled. I just loved it!

You broke my heart so many times but it was well worth it.

I'm definitely fav'ing this to read again later. So damn well done.
a123b chapter 6 . 3/30/2015
I've been shipping Hermione and Harry since I was 5 and the first movie came out, so I like that little tidbit.
a123b chapter 4 . 3/30/2015
I loved this one, something cool about spy Snape. And I totally called the smile thing
Guest chapter 8 . 2/11/2015
why do you capitalize your words? It's annoying.
Nero chapter 2 . 2/8/2015
I clearly cant stress it enough. This is one of the best fanfiction written. Love it.
Ferm chapter 11 . 1/18/2015
this was a very, very good fic. The content was amazing, as well as the writing. The concept was aptly explained, and the sevlily relationship was thoroughly analysed. Loved it. One of my all time Favs.

One thing that irked me was your tendency to capitalize the words. It adds emphasis to them,but the same can be easily achieved by one cap. word.
dragoon109 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
what would have happened if lilly accepted responsibility for stealing petunia's letter from hogwarts?
Qoheleth chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Dear Escoger:

Okay, so we've got an afterlife where joy is a fruit of wickedness and Purgatory lasts longer than Hell. May I ask why you're using the Christian names, then?

Crazykrew616 chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
i know its to late to vote but i would like to say what stories i would have liked to have seen...

When Severus hints to Lily about Lupin in fourth year, in connection to James' 'heroics', Lily gets curious about the possibility of him being a werewolf rather than dismissing Severus' concerns.

After Sev tells her she's a witch, instead of running off with Petunia, she should stay and prod him for further proof.

In Seventh-year, Lily had come accross the Marauders as they are bullying Severus, after they had 'changed'.

That day by the park when Severus jumps out of the bushes to say 'hi' to Lily and Petunia, Lily decided to stay home instead.

Lily figures out about Lupin being a werewolf before Severus does.

When Sev says his father "doesn't like anything much" Lily becomes concerned and decides to delve deeper into this issue and help in some way, as opposed to continuing with the questions on Azkaban.

my thought...
where Severus was bitten by lupin... either dieing or changing... seeing how that would change everyone's life
1 where he died Lilly being lost and angered for revenge...
2 where Severus took on the lead werewolf Fenrir Greyback and attacked the world under the Dark Lord...

one where Lilly is in Severus place as the outcast and him as the popular one... showing Lilly what he would have done to have helped her...

one where Lilly was one of the Marauders. having been convinced as Severus was to 'fit in' with their house. she helped tormented her childhood friend (they were children and children are hurtful... anything as to not be an outcast...
i would have liked to see Lilly's thought of what happen in the whomping willow... either as an outsider or as part of it...

thank you for your time and this new view of what ifs...
Crazykrew616 chapter 11 . 4/15/2014
i really like to see this story: Penance, The Purgatory of James...

i want to see James see what pain he had inflicted... and that if maybe one act of true humility and kindness the world might have prosper with a happy Severus...
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