|Reviews for What if? The Purgatory of Lily|
| a123b chapter 6 . 3/30
I've been shipping Hermione and Harry since I was 5 and the first movie came out, so I like that little tidbit.
| a123b chapter 4 . 3/30
I loved this one, something cool about spy Snape. And I totally called the smile thing
| Guest chapter 8 . 2/11
why do you capitalize your words? It's annoying.
| Nero chapter 2 . 2/8
I clearly cant stress it enough. This is one of the best fanfiction written. Love it.
| Assasin Nero chapter 11 . 1/18
this was a very, very good fic. The content was amazing, as well as the writing. The concept was aptly explained, and the sevlily relationship was thoroughly analysed. Loved it. One of my all time Favs.
One thing that irked me was your tendency to capitalize the words. It adds emphasis to them,but the same can be easily achieved by one cap. word.
| dragoon109 chapter 2 . 9/21/2014
what would have happened if lilly accepted responsibility for stealing petunia's letter from hogwarts?
| Qoheleth chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Okay, so we've got an afterlife where joy is a fruit of wickedness and Purgatory lasts longer than Hell. May I ask why you're using the Christian names, then?
| crazykrew chapter 1 . 4/15/2014
i know its to late to vote but i would like to say what stories i would have liked to have seen...
When Severus hints to Lily about Lupin in fourth year, in connection to James' 'heroics', Lily gets curious about the possibility of him being a werewolf rather than dismissing Severus' concerns.
After Sev tells her she's a witch, instead of running off with Petunia, she should stay and prod him for further proof.
In Seventh-year, Lily had come accross the Marauders as they are bullying Severus, after they had 'changed'.
That day by the park when Severus jumps out of the bushes to say 'hi' to Lily and Petunia, Lily decided to stay home instead.
Lily figures out about Lupin being a werewolf before Severus does.
When Sev says his father "doesn't like anything much" Lily becomes concerned and decides to delve deeper into this issue and help in some way, as opposed to continuing with the questions on Azkaban.
where Severus was bitten by lupin... either dieing or changing... seeing how that would change everyone's life
1 where he died Lilly being lost and angered for revenge...
2 where Severus took on the lead werewolf Fenrir Greyback and attacked the world under the Dark Lord...
one where Lilly is in Severus place as the outcast and him as the popular one... showing Lilly what he would have done to have helped her...
one where Lilly was one of the Marauders. having been convinced as Severus was to 'fit in' with their house. she helped tormented her childhood friend (they were children and children are hurtful... anything as to not be an outcast...
i would have liked to see Lilly's thought of what happen in the whomping willow... either as an outsider or as part of it...
thank you for your time and this new view of what ifs...
| crazykrew chapter 11 . 4/15/2014
i really like to see this story: Penance, The Purgatory of James...
i want to see James see what pain he had inflicted... and that if maybe one act of true humility and kindness the world might have prosper with a happy Severus...
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/26/2013
Maybe Lily could walk in on Sirius telling Severus about the Whomping Willow and convinces him not to go, instead asking Remus herself.
| Elise a guest chapter 2 . 6/26/2013
What if Lily had asked the Sorting Hat to put her in Slytherin so that she could be with Severus AND let him still make his mom happy.
| SS chapter 11 . 5/3/2013
| Guest chapter 5 . 2/27/2013
No complaints here about 'friendly Death Eaters' (although the name Really should have tipped someone off...). The KKK and Freemasons were more community clubs up until a certain level of 'dedication'. I was going to offer another choice, then noticed the completed sign: thanks for the effort you put into writing this -and don't think I glossed over the very clear fact that you basically sent James Potter down the river Nyx without a paddle...kind of amusing, now that I think of it.
| elemout chapter 10 . 1/20/2013
Really lovely way to end things although I don't feel Lily was worthy of being Severus's choice. Still what can he do but follow his treacherous heart
| elemout chapter 8 . 1/20/2013
Yes! One of my favorite pairings for Severus\Hermione. I also really like how in this chapter the truth hurts James. I never really liked Lily and some of these make it clearer why since she really was very self-absorbed. However, your versions make her a little more sympathetic.