|Reviews for MOTHER 3: A Wish Taken for Granted|
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/4/2012
Aww man! Not a happy ending rewrite!
| Mibani chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
I'm sorry but...
Lucas was walking aroun(d) Tazimilly (Tazmilly) Villige (Village) one day.
Claus and Hinaw(a) were still dead.
He went to bed with his dady Flint and dog Bone(y) one night and thinking.
Lucas got rise up out of bed and to his much supriseit (Surprise it) was his brother Claus.
He fell into a large fangn(I don't even know what you were trying to put!) and was strike many times by lightning.
Sorry, but could you fix those? Over all cute, and I wanna read more like it!
| fassiofassad chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
dis iz me favrite stry