|Reviews for What Then?|
| Sweetheart5793 chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Your an okay writer, and the fic was descent, but I think you should try to write longer stories. Even if their still oneshots, you should write something that would be more than a page on word. The story wasn't bad, but it really wasn't anything special. Sorry, but I think if you put more into a fic and made it longer it would be a lot better. You definitely have potential, but you need to put it to good use.
Hope you don't hate more for my comments, reviews are supposed to help better your writing abilities as well as make you feel better. :)
| onceuponachildhood chapter 1 . 3/26/2009
Good question, Matty.
| adorable illusion chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Short and sweet. I like it.