|Reviews for The Primordial|
| calypso tchaka chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this tidbit. Even if you don't plan to use this further for any of your stories I loved the imagery. You were correct. :) hope you are doing well. I wonder if there are any other YugiOh/HP stories with Yugi and Yami out there that are worth reading... Oh well, let's cross fingers.
Thank you very much for sharing this. I'd actually love to read more of this genre, you wrote wonderfully. Enjoy your week!
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
| so-adorabloodthirsty chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
It's shake you don't want to build a story around it. It's hard to find good Yuugi/Yami/Atem centered crossovers where it's either blind or puzzleshipping...
| sakura12345 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
...Wow. I liked it, interesting to read.
| bostafu chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
And THAT is the picturesque of blindshipping. Well done.
| One of the Colorless chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Yes... no more of them... *shifty eyes*
| andysanime chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Really good job!
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Great imagery, indeed. I'm assuming there's an entire background we readers can make up?
| simply ikang chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
A kiss couldn't get more intimate like that. You painted a very vivid scene, and that kiss was my favorite part even though Atem-Yugi pairings make me uncomfortable because... well... they're practically the same person... to me at least (still half-way through zorc saga, I have no idea how it'll end). But that scene just spoke to me of desperation and searing relief that it's almost painful. Just powerful.
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
loved it. although, they're not really the only ones, are they.
| Belle Mort 13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
the imagery is so vivid and so beautiful
this is what fanfiction should be
you captured the most perfect Yugi and Yami scene ever in this
it is THE Yugioh fanfiction
| apple-06 chapter 1 . 11/11/2009
I just luuvv your fics!
especially Alias of Chaos and Gemini!
| Zuzanny chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
aren;t any more like them? *giiglechoaksnort!*
| Yizuki chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
This story is really good. And it really would work in Alias Of Chaos. I can't wait to rad more of Alias of Chaos by the way. Could you write more please?
| shadowninja-yuna chapter 1 . 5/25/2009
Wow... now that's something that should be animated :D Stupid Voldemort. Wish Yami crushed him... D: