|Reviews for The Primordial|
| Mystic Dodo chapter 1 . 3/18
Gwaaaa, I love this! Well done :)
| Marvel fan 98 chapter 1 . 11/1/2014
Write what happened before this. It would be so interesting! Also, what happens after.
| Angelic Phantomcrow chapter 1 . 9/6/2014
Don't have good words for what I want to describe...But it's all positive, sorry...
I wonder what would happen if Dumbledore would meet Ryou and Bakura...
Anyway thank you!
| Yuu3 chapter 1 . 3/18/2014
I don't know why I don't know why /Idon'tknowwhy!/ but this touched me. It touched me.
| calypso tchaka chapter 1 . 3/18/2013
I thoroughly enjoyed this tidbit. Even if you don't plan to use this further for any of your stories I loved the imagery. You were correct. :) hope you are doing well. I wonder if there are any other YugiOh/HP stories with Yugi and Yami out there that are worth reading... Oh well, let's cross fingers.
Thank you very much for sharing this. I'd actually love to read more of this genre, you wrote wonderfully. Enjoy your week!
| 777angeloflove chapter 1 . 8/22/2012
| so-adorabloodthirsty chapter 1 . 7/10/2012
It's shake you don't want to build a story around it. It's hard to find good Yuugi/Yami/Atem centered crossovers where it's either blind or puzzleshipping...
| sakura12345 chapter 1 . 6/15/2012
...Wow. I liked it, interesting to read.
| bostafu chapter 1 . 2/23/2012
And THAT is the picturesque of blindshipping. Well done.
| One of the Colorless chapter 1 . 10/22/2011
Yes... no more of them... *shifty eyes*
| andysanime chapter 1 . 6/30/2011
Really good job!
| TexasDreamer01 chapter 1 . 4/6/2011
Great imagery, indeed. I'm assuming there's an entire background we readers can make up?
| pinklatent chapter 1 . 3/19/2011
A kiss couldn't get more intimate like that. You painted a very vivid scene, and that kiss was my favorite part even though Atem-Yugi pairings make me uncomfortable because... well... they're practically the same person... to me at least (still half-way through zorc saga, I have no idea how it'll end). But that scene just spoke to me of desperation and searing relief that it's almost painful. Just powerful.
| killing u with umbrellas chapter 1 . 9/17/2010
loved it. although, they're not really the only ones, are they.
| Belle Mort 13 chapter 1 . 3/7/2010
the imagery is so vivid and so beautiful
this is what fanfiction should be
you captured the most perfect Yugi and Yami scene ever in this
it is THE Yugioh fanfiction