|Reviews for Cruor Quod Unda Blood And Water|
| Rowan Rosethorne chapter 5 . 3/21/2009
Hm, why would James agree to leave his son and heir in England while taking his daughter with him to America? And, yeah, I'm sorry to say this but your OC, beatrice, is too much of a mary sue to make me like her. It's possible that she's better at one thing or two than harry but to have her better than him at everything...that's like saying "hey, harry doesn't need to save the darn world, let's just have the perfect twin do it". all in all, you succeeded in making harry look like a useless tool whose only purpose is to highlight beatrice's perfectness. ts..