Reviews for A pentagon of love
tamaoxhao chapter 9 . 5/14/2012
me gusto un poco la historia sobre todo cuando tamao se enfrenta a hao en el bosque 0w0
RachelClaire chapter 9 . 10/9/2010
Aah that was really good! I definitely didn't expect the twist where she killed Hao, but a really lovely ending :) One thing I think you could look out for is too much dialogue without any description. I noticed this particularly at the beginning of chapter 6, but it came up quite a bit. Description is your friend! :D But other than that, really well done!
Zabaniya chapter 9 . 7/13/2010
well i wasn't really expecting such a sad story,(since i like hao better)

This should have been a lysergXtamao,if this is the ending. Sorry if i may be taking things too much, but that really is the thing here so sorry.
Lupe C chapter 5 . 8/3/2009
Good chapters :)

I really like how the story is going so far
Lupe C chapter 3 . 4/12/2009
really good chapter :)

can't wait till hao appears!

hope you update soon
i14 chapter 2 . 4/5/2009
love it! can't wait to see what the next chapter brings:)update soon plz
luvgoodstuf chapter 2 . 3/29/2009
omg! this is gourgeous, please update cuzz i love this story!
Lupe C chapter 2 . 3/25/2009
I liked the first chapters :)

I really want to know how it will turn out.

hope you update soon