|Reviews for Spontaneous|
| tatiana chapter 9 . 10/7/2011
I love it I think you should make Bella pregnant with thriples and update this is good.
| clara-eloise chapter 1 . 10/4/2011
| leahprovins chapter 9 . 8/13/2011
this was awesome love you style of writing love the lemons too lol hope to hear more soon dom jack just makes me querm and want more of that lol keep the good work comming
| McFoster chapter 1 . 5/26/2011
Wow that was good!
| tatiana chapter 9 . 11/3/2010
Wow now when is Bella gonna get pregnant
| mschris44 chapter 1 . 10/31/2010
That was sooo HOT!
| FreaKiki chapter 9 . 8/30/2010
Wow, that was amazing. There are no other words to describe it. I love seeing the kinky side of them but this loving side is so good too. More please.
| WhatEverHappenedToUs chapter 9 . 8/30/2010
I love the chemistry between the two of them! And I love how you are just doing lemons :)
| jharv241 chapter 9 . 8/30/2010
Excellent chapter you can just feel the love between them two such a beautiful chapter.
| Heart Beats For None chapter 9 . 8/29/2010
It was well worth the wait. I totally love you story. I cant wait to read what else you come up with!
The fishing trip was funny i have to say i would of been exactly the same as Bella yuck killing little worms not my thing. And jake proving to her his love by cookinh dinner and worshipping her body was beautiful!
Thank you xxx
| timotei chapter 8 . 8/19/2010
All chapters simply HOT! :D Keep up the awesome work! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
| AngelOfDarkness352 chapter 1 . 8/9/2010
great story so far
| Georgia-Coral chapter 8 . 7/14/2010
You are one amazingly talented writer. I'm bursting with jealousy here! You ought to be so proud of your talent!
Can't wait for the second part - part one was so cute.
| sdeeeee chapter 3 . 6/28/2010
ooh, LOVE dominant Jake...you write lemons really well...keep it up please
| freak-4-God chapter 5 . 6/27/2010
You should have one where he's a wolf and they have sex. I've always wanted to read one where he's in his wolf form.