Reviews for Contemplations: Roxas
KaUiA chapter 1 . 1/27/2010
Roxas view of Sora was something you usually don't see.

I like how Roxas' thoughts were portrayed!
Xangelic-demonicX chapter 1 . 1/4/2010
Okay...I like EVERYTHING ABOUT THIS...EXCEPT FOR THE LAST LINE. I'm sorry...that's a really depressing end to a really well written one-shot...

"And Sora really did..." What the heck?

I'm not saying I could have done better or anything, just that you may want to reconsider the ending...

Everything else is fantastic though, I really think you captures Roxas' perspective well.


Khelc-sul Renai chapter 1 . 11/20/2009
It's always intersting seeing Roxas' view of Sora... I like it.
hintcoin chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
i feel so sorry for roxas now! i always wondered what he meant by "tell me why he picked you" and why he would fight sora. yes, it would be a bit weird for sora to fight himself and win...and lose at the same time. [nyeh! my head hurts now!] once again, characterization was brilliant!

NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
That was so cool! Believe it! ~Simlies~...Roxas...
Firehedgehog chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
its great, yet also a bit sad
the bird of the chapel chapter 1 . 3/21/2009
Nice to put the scene into writing, though you forgot to describe the bubbly lights when Roxas was disappearing D: or when Roxas was disappearing at all, lol.