Reviews for Checkmate
Andromeda Rising chapter 1 . 3/13/2014
This was a really interesting oneshot and I think you captured the personalities of both Ken and Kari rather perfectly, down to the minutest details that really come together to show who they are as characters. I didn't really think about it while watching the show but Ken and Kari could have a really interesting dynamic-I mean, the light/dark dichotomy is pretty obvious but it's interesting to see it play out in how they interact with one another. I feel like they're much more similar than I originally thought and you really showed how, despite their differences, they're not so different after all. Excellently written.
Cstan chapter 1 . 10/30/2010
A really interesting look into Kari's and Ken's characters.

Maybe you could have mentioned that everyone was afraid of Kari breaking because she was always so sick and nearly died two or three times.
DV2 chapter 1 . 4/12/2009
you very well captured the views between light and dark in a way understandable, and for that you should be commended, I relize that your story is a few weeks old and I'm sorry I didn't discover it sooner it is wonderful
ARCtheElite chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
You need to write more. More! MORE!

...that was my moment of insanity. But really, you spin these intimate scenes really well. You should write a story based on every relationship (whether friendship, romance, family, enemy, etc.). If you have time.
KOI Seracus chapter 1 . 3/27/2009
Ha! I love the ending. The whole thing, really: it's deep in a nice easy fashion. Great job!
Hikari M chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
...XDD; Ok, it seems the rest of my review was cut off, but I was basically saying it's awesome that you like Digimon now too, ) and that this story was very well written! Which is very great because we seriously need more Digimon goodfic, haha! Digimon is a wonderful show and I'm so glad you like it now. Keep up the great work! ~Hikari
Hikarii M chapter 1 . 3/23/2009
OH MY GOSH you like Digimon now too? Yay! You are awesome!
SugarSpiral chapter 1 . 3/22/2009
It's great how you write so clearly.

This fic made me giggle _a_n_d think. A rare combination.

I love how it explores the similarities and differences between Ken and Kari, their relationship and Ken's mind.

It's all good.

And btw, the uncreative chapter title fits this well, so shush.
Expired In Goreville chapter 1 . 3/21/2009


And cute too, actually.

Keep up the good work.