Reviews for Bleach: Secret Slayer and the Shinigami
Kai uzmaki chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
I'm sendin this review via itouch. U have not got the proper ammount of reviews thau u deserve. Yes the story is somewhat rushed at points and a little hard to understand but isn't it the faults in a story that meke it good? Hands down this is a great story. I argue with u on the last chapter being cliche. It was very creative. I hope u keep writing. I sugest not always having the story in 1st person. 3rd person is one of the best ways to deacribe any scene. Please keep writing!

Kai uzmaki
Dolce Latte van Creme chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
That was KAWAII!
xLilim chapter 16 . 4/14/2009
I loved it! :] I'm gonna go read the sequel now :D
Tenshi Akki-chan chapter 12 . 4/2/2009
Aizen, ichigo, ulquiorra and now grimmi too? god i wish i were her can i exchange places with her? pwetty pwese? x3
insaneoneX chapter 12 . 4/1/2009
omg, this story is really good XD but there sure r a lot of love triangles? squares? come type of shape XP hurry up ichigo if u want the girl XD thanks for the update
Larn555 chapter 11 . 4/1/2009
that was so sad. and i love it. update plz.
Tenshi Akki-chan chapter 11 . 4/1/2009
God job! I love it! I love your ideas. I just think you could slow down a bit, the story seems to be going too fast! If the story goes fast, it will be closer to its ending! O so i really like this story and i don't want it to end quickly T.T

Good luck and i'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
xLilim chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Oh, interesting so far. :] I like, I like! :D