|Reviews for Bleach: Secret Slayer and the Shinigami|
| Kai uzmaki chapter 16 . 3/3/2010
I'm sendin this review via itouch. U have not got the proper ammount of reviews thau u deserve. Yes the story is somewhat rushed at points and a little hard to understand but isn't it the faults in a story that meke it good? Hands down this is a great story. I argue with u on the last chapter being cliche. It was very creative. I hope u keep writing. I sugest not always having the story in 1st person. 3rd person is one of the best ways to deacribe any scene. Please keep writing!
| Dolce Latte van Creme chapter 16 . 8/17/2009
That was KAWAII!
| xLilim chapter 16 . 4/14/2009
I loved it! :] I'm gonna go read the sequel now :D
| Tenshi Akki-chan chapter 12 . 4/2/2009
Aizen, ichigo, ulquiorra and now grimmi too? god i wish i were her can i exchange places with her? pwetty pwese? x3
| insaneoneX chapter 12 . 4/1/2009
omg, this story is really good XD but there sure r a lot of love triangles? squares? come type of shape XP hurry up ichigo if u want the girl XD thanks for the update
| Larn555 chapter 11 . 4/1/2009
that was so sad. and i love it. update plz.
| Tenshi Akki-chan chapter 11 . 4/1/2009
God job! I love it! I love your ideas. I just think you could slow down a bit, the story seems to be going too fast! If the story goes fast, it will be closer to its ending! O so i really like this story and i don't want it to end quickly T.T
Good luck and i'm looking forward to the next chapter! :D
| xLilim chapter 1 . 3/25/2009
Oh, interesting so far. :] I like, I like! :D