| Reviews for The Ritual |
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   CynMar Rom chapter 26 . 4/27/2023 Awwwww. This was such a good, worthwhile journey. It hurt to read at some points, but it was so, soo good. Thanks for sharing! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 6/25/2021 I get that Edward has issues and he is always into Bella- but I fail to see the attraction of this Bella- she is a consistently bitchy drunk. and something of an idiot. Half a brain is required to see she needs huge ongoing therapy so not getting it at all. What are her redeeming features other than Edward likes her in bed? |
| Kiki68 chapter 26 . 9/3/2020 Lovely story. It's nice to see a story which shows Bella as an addict. It's a sweet story. I won't lie Edward was irritating in places the way he kept pushing and downright creepy with the ways to try and find her. I was honestly hoping for a supportive Charlie but after reading the final few chapters he's definitely the most hated character. Really enjoyed reading this I did wish there was more- a longer ending or a few more chapters about Bella and Edward life post rehab/sober house. |
| Secretrevenge chapter 5 . 6/2/2019 Southeastern Missouri? I went to school at Cape Girardeau. |
| locheree chapter 26 . 8/17/2018 This is my first time reviewing as it was an already finished story. I have a question, though...Do you have a sequel or a one shot that involves Charlie getting his just desserts? Just wondering. |
| Cool Bananas chapter 4 . 7/20/2018 sigh... |
| Cool Bananas chapter 3 . 7/20/2018 Wow! Never knew! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 2 . 7/19/2018 Of course! |
| Cool Bananas chapter 1 . 7/19/2018 Wow! x1,000,000! |
| Guest chapter 26 . 10/16/2017 Wonderful story, this was my first time reading a story with Bella being an addict/alcoholic (it's always the other way around) but i enjoyed it very much, their love was beautiful although i wished we saw more of her pregnancy, you did a great job! |
| BRENDA WARREN chapter 26 . 9/16/2017 I ENJOYED YOUR STORY SOME THINGS CONFUZED ME, WHAT EDWARD STARTED WORKING DOING AFTER HE SOLD THE BAR ,WWHEN THEY GOT MARRIED AN HAD THE BELLA IS DOING NOW WORK I LOVE THEM BEING TOGETHER THANK YOU. |
| amsrule chapter 1 . 6/16/2017 loved it! |
| Just Me and My Vamps chapter 2 . 5/7/2017 Omg what a coincidence lol |
| Just Me and My Vamps chapter 1 . 5/7/2017 Wonderful start |
| Jane3105 chapter 26 . 5/6/2017 Wonderful story, beautifully written. (Found on Twifanfictionrecs) |