Reviews for The Ritual
pillowbiteraml chapter 5 . 3/29/2011
Damn. Renee was with James? Sheesh that's scary! I can't even begin to fathom what Bella must have gone through with the psycho! Dinner with Es brother should be interesting
pillowbiteraml chapter 4 . 3/29/2011
I'm excited to see Bella talking to Edward a little. It's understandable that she doesn't want to tell him her life story...for now :)
pillowbiteraml chapter 3 . 3/28/2011
So yeah... I thought Edward was going to hold the cards... Not so much. It turns out Edward is putty in Bellas hands. He is going to need a suit of armor and thick skin to prepare for this battle.
pillowbiteraml chapter 2 . 3/28/2011
I'm so, so sad for Bella. Addiction is a strong and fierce thing to battle. Her excuses and reasonings she said to Alice are heartbreaking too.
pillowbiteraml chapter 1 . 3/28/2011
That was an intense first chapter...wow. I'm excited to see what happens!
cheddah chapter 26 . 3/28/2011
where was the wedding? Haha...jk. Perfect ending to a wonderful story. Really proud of you, my friend! We'll celebrate in Nov at LocaCon!

CHEERS!

chedd
skye282 chapter 26 . 3/27/2011
The Epi was so good. I loved to hear that they were together and happy still and have a little one also. Bella is still working through her issue which is a good thing but stuff like that takes a long to heal and you showed that everything was still not all rosy for her. Wonderful story :)
robfans chapter 26 . 3/26/2011
the baby is heart melting
tragicallyepic chapter 26 . 3/26/2011
Oh, such a perfect ending, I loved it so much! Ahhh, I want to cry now. lol.
wonderfullybedazzled chapter 26 . 3/26/2011
I am so glad you finished this! I loved it. How do you juggle writing so many stories?
deanna127 chapter 26 . 3/26/2011
Fabulous!
missmelly chapter 26 . 3/26/2011
Ahh! Delightfully sweet and sexy—you always "hit the mark" perfectly. Thanks for this difficult but edifying ride.
mujisan chapter 26 . 3/25/2011
I've really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us.
beautiful ink chapter 26 . 3/25/2011
Wow, that ending was awesome. You did such a wonderful job!
TwilightMomOf3 chapter 26 . 3/25/2011
I LOVED IT! SAD ITS OVER, BUT VERY PLEASE WITH THE EPI!
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