Reviews for The Ritual |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. Renee was with James? Sheesh that's scary! I can't even begin to fathom what Bella must have gone through with the psycho! Dinner with Es brother should be interesting |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm excited to see Bella talking to Edward a little. It's understandable that she doesn't want to tell him her life story...for now :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() So yeah... I thought Edward was going to hold the cards... Not so much. It turns out Edward is putty in Bellas hands. He is going to need a suit of armor and thick skin to prepare for this battle. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so, so sad for Bella. Addiction is a strong and fierce thing to battle. Her excuses and reasonings she said to Alice are heartbreaking too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was an intense first chapter...wow. I'm excited to see what happens! |
![]() ![]() ![]() where was the wedding? Haha...jk. Perfect ending to a wonderful story. Really proud of you, my friend! We'll celebrate in Nov at LocaCon! CHEERS! chedd |
![]() ![]() ![]() The Epi was so good. I loved to hear that they were together and happy still and have a little one also. Bella is still working through her issue which is a good thing but stuff like that takes a long to heal and you showed that everything was still not all rosy for her. Wonderful story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() the baby is heart melting |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, such a perfect ending, I loved it so much! Ahhh, I want to cry now. lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am so glad you finished this! I loved it. How do you juggle writing so many stories? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fabulous! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahh! Delightfully sweet and sexy—you always "hit the mark" perfectly. Thanks for this difficult but edifying ride. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I've really enjoyed reading this story. Thanks so much for sharing it with us. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, that ending was awesome. You did such a wonderful job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I LOVED IT! SAD ITS OVER, BUT VERY PLEASE WITH THE EPI! |